NCIS:Rag Doll. Angst/Drama PG 13 14/? (Tony-centric)

Nov 24, 2010 06:24

Title: Rag Doll
Chapter: 14/?
Fandom: NCIS
Author: cheekymice
Rating: PG13
Beta: Scousmuz1K
Genre: Drama/Angst
Disclaimer: I don't own anything relating to the TV show NCIS sadly.
Notes: So here I am back again with another multi chapter fic. I hope you enjoy. This will be my usual brand of overblown angst with a soupcon of whumpage. I can say that this ( Read more... )

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fredsmith518 November 24 2010, 22:30:12 UTC
found this too late for coherent comment...long day
delighted to see update, wil return to read properly

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fredsmith518 November 25 2010, 21:23:27 UTC
hmm, interesting, I like that you cut to the return rather than hospital stuff, especially liked “He doesn’t need to ‘talk’, we do the job and we move on. That’s how it goes,” Gibbs lied.

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starbuckssue November 24 2010, 22:42:08 UTC
Finding Tony was one thing but it doesn't sound like he tried to talk to him, Tony seems to have too much bottled up still. And who were the visitors and why did he not want to tell Gibbs who they were??? Intriguing, great to see another chapter of this.

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kateri_e November 25 2010, 05:14:36 UTC
Oh wow.... unable to form a coherent thought beyond that was great. Can't wait for the next chapter

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mamamia1964 November 26 2010, 16:18:58 UTC
I agree with all the other comments. I already told you before that I was glad to see you skipping the hospital stuff, not necessary. I'm intrigued by who might be visiting Tony.

I really appreciated the relationship you show between Tony and Gibbs, professional, respectful, intuitive.

Great job!

Vicky
(p.s. post more soon! i'm sick of seeing nothing but 'tiva' drivel being posted. i want decent fic, so hurry up!)

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tdnk64 November 26 2010, 20:42:43 UTC

I agree with all the other comments too!! Hurry up with the next chapter!!

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