O - the story continues

Nov 07, 2005 12:33

Yes, I finished it. I'm a horny liar, what can I say ( Read more... )

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lissannej November 8 2005, 00:02:21 UTC
I'm sorry I never emailed you back -- I read it the next morning but haven't had a chance to get back to you. I suck as a friend :( I did enjoy it but had questions about it, which are now moot since you posted it. But I'm glad you did post!

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cheeringcharm November 8 2005, 02:42:14 UTC
Of course, your observation would have made me very clever indeed. Alas, I'm not. But, I love the idea of it.

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54321sherry November 8 2005, 00:06:52 UTC
I liked your exploration of these characters bent on self-destructive paths. The ending was perfect with its ambiguous interpretation of their friendship/relationships/future. I know this was a departure for you but I like how you think outside the box. Your dark side has a gift for shock and awe. Very nicely done.

It was over. And they knew it.

A very fitting end. Bravo.

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cheeringcharm November 8 2005, 02:47:51 UTC
I have a dark side? Who knew?

I edited the entry b/c I forgot to mention you in my thanks. So sorry about that! Thanks so much for the encouragement.

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cheeringcharm November 8 2005, 02:28:11 UTC
Sorry! But, if I warned you then the shock would be gone.

know that this is fanfic-land, everything is possible, but I just can't see Harry acting like he did with both Hermione and then Ron.

I don't know. This whole fic is about doing something you know is wrong but unable to do the right thing. Things are out of your control, and as such, you act a little out of character.

I knew this would be controversial to the majority of my readers, which is why I didn't go public with it. I won't put a warning on it b/c that makes it lose something. I hate to know there's going to be a twist.

Erm, I'm glad you liked it. I think you liked it...can't really tell. But, thanks for the feedback regardless!

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caalan November 8 2005, 02:22:34 UTC
To say I am shocked would be an understatement. My enjoyment of the story certainly isn't! I'm extremely thirsty for some reason. *fans self*

Great ending, for some odd reason, I just had that flash of Emma/Hermione when she said..."Everything's going to change now, isn't it?"

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cheeringcharm November 8 2005, 02:29:57 UTC
LoL. I'd say she's right; everything is going to change. But, what happens is up to you. As Spongebob tells Squidward "Use your Imaginaaaaaation."

Who is that in your icon? Cedric?

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demosthenes91 November 8 2005, 04:24:45 UTC
Gah!

Okay - totally and utterly was not expecting that ending! And yes, as someone else said, that's even MORE of a cliffie than before!!

Evil, wretched woman!

I cannot believe you wrote TRIOFIC!

*dies*

But you know - it was damn good... I mean, all the wonderful smut I remembered from before with a horrifying little toy surprise at the bottom of the cereal box. However, I still see this as a full on H/Hr fic - with a nasty Ron surprise at the end - but H/Hr regardless.

And yeah - about a dozen questions/possibilities floating around in my vacant head. How dare you make me think when reading smut! How dare you!

*laughs*

Hey - I'm just happy to have you write anything HP again!

*hugs*

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