Tragic Little Hero Part 4

[cheeringcharm]

I don't have a title for this puppy, so if anyone has suggestions, bring them on!

Comments

[annearchy]

Is this the last one in the series??! SQUEEEEE! It's fantastic. What a lovely way to wrap things up. I loved the tentativeness of both of them, how Harry was SURE he had bollixed things up with Hermione. The little kissing session on the couch was wonderful, including the hand-holding that went before this. I can SO see this happening in canon (or at least hope for it). Great work, Mel :D

[cheeringcharm]

Thanks! No title ideas for me? ;)

[cheeringcharm]

You know, I just had a title idea. "Uncharted Terriroty." Cheesy? Yes. But, it might work. What do you think?

[annearchy]

I'm the LAST person you should ask for a title. It took me a solid MONTH to come up with a title for oh_honestleigh's last little smutlet. I'm not even titling the chapters of my WIP, otherwise I'd never post them :(

Eh, let me read it again and think about it:)

[aloverestrained]

*all tingly*

that was GREAT!!!!!

I really needed that after the book cover scare.

[cheeringcharm]

lol

I feel responsible for the book cover scare. This is my ammends!

mel

[avidbeader]

Absolutely fabulous, Mel! A great read and their characters rang true throughout.

The only title I dea that came to me was along the lines of "uncharted territory", from your first paragraph. Sort of an idea that they've stopped going in circles around each other and are about to sail into the untested waters side by side.

[cheeringcharm]

I think I like Uncharted Territory, too. I need to check Portkey to make sure there aren't any fics with that name already.

Glad you liked it!

mel

[cheeringcharm]

What I liked most was the lack of dark angst.

Dark angst is good. It has it's place. But, I don't know that I could ever write that.

I also liked that they didn't need to say or explain why they felt attracted to each other. Harry just needed to kiss her and know that she liked him back. Simple and effective,

After two years in fandom and reading fan fic (not a long time to be sure) I've had my fill of over explanation. Less is more. I'm trying to go by that motto. This fic is 9 pages, one of my shortest ever (that isn't smut 8) )

Thanks for the review!

[october103]

This was just adorable!!! It's just the way I'd envision them to get together. Thanks for that!
And believe me, you're not responsible for the book scare. There are scare Harmonians everywhere today. This fic helps our angst.

[cheeringcharm]

Glad to allieviate angst any way I can!

mel