Fic: Firewater Fellow (Veronica/Logan), PG

Apr 10, 2006 17:25

Title: Firewater Fellow
Author: Eolivet
Pairing/Character: Logan angst, Veronica/Logan
Word Count: 1,102
Rating: PG.
Summary: He'd saved her instead of himself.
Lyrics: "I'm the Only One" by Melissa Etheridge.
Spoilers/Warnings: AU - what might've happened if Logan had answered his phone when Veronica called him in LitB.

Firewater Fellow )

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thatmarsgirl April 10 2006, 23:06:25 UTC
This was heartbreaking :( But beautifully written. ♥

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eolivet April 11 2006, 00:41:48 UTC
Awww, thank you so much -- that's so nice of you to say!!! :) And thanks for reading!!! :D

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boxofmoonlight April 16 2006, 04:17:33 UTC
I'll admit it took me a couple seconds to understand who the other 'she' was. But I really enjoyed this. It was short, sweet, and to the point, but tragic at the same time. A little snapshot of heartbreak.

I really, really loved it.

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eolivet April 18 2006, 18:20:26 UTC
Oh thank you so much -- what a wonderful compliment!!! :D I really appreciate it (and it's intentionally vague at the beginning, so I'm thrilled you understood it at all ;) Thanks for reading!!! :)

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boxofmoonlight April 19 2006, 03:02:08 UTC
Hehe, no problemo! Yeah, I had to go back and read some parts a second time 'cause my brain was just doing flipflops. But the fact that I cared enough to go back and understand is definitely a sign that you did a great job, at least from the perspective of my reading tendencies (not sure ANY of that makes sense, lol!... I just mean, sometimes I won't even bother to understand a story 'cause I don't care. But in this case I really did, so that's an even bigger sign that your story rocks! Hehe).

But yeah, great work! I especially like it 'cause it leaves so many possibilities as to what might possibly have happened next for them.

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eolivet May 24 2006, 16:45:27 UTC
Awww, you're so sweet to comment -- glad you...enjoyed it? :) Thanks so much for reading!!! :D

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katiebug78 March 30 2007, 15:30:28 UTC
Through a convoluted means too detailed to explain, I just found this and it is wonderful. Probably not the best thing to read right before bed, but so amazingly vivid. Poor Logan - I really am still only interested in S1 Logan, before he was neutured, and this is a brilliant portrayal...

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eolivet March 30 2007, 16:33:06 UTC
Oh, wow...well, I thank you so much for finding it, and for taking the time to comment. :D That's really nice of you!!! I appreciate you reading (and I love S1 Logan, too ;) Thanks again!!! :)

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