Oh my, if it was possible to take a story, give it a cuddle and a hot chocolate, I would. Excellent!
What's very impressive is how canon it is. The changes you've made are all authentic (Katie still being shallow and a touch homophobic, Noami being as prickly as she was at the beginning of season three, Emily being a touch more confident but still trying to forge her own non twin identity) but the central dynamic between Naomi/Emily remain very IC to me. I like how they work, Emily being giving but being firm when necessary, Naomi challenging Emily's shyness. Like most excellent N/E fics, I like how they're not soppy at all, but remain true the blonde pickly cunt with emotional barriers and the tiny introvert with aggressive tendencies. Unlike that.....skins novel, which is an abomination. YOU SHOULD HAVE WRITTEN IT INSTEAD (at least you wouldn't have had Naomi call Emily "her red headed angel")
In short (for me, anyway) I LOVES IITTTTTTTTTTTTTT *molests story*
I hope season four inspires you to write more stories *SUBTLE cough*
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and this line...
she’s going to shatter and she’s going to salt the earth.
is incredibly good.
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What's very impressive is how canon it is. The changes you've made are all authentic (Katie still being shallow and a touch homophobic, Noami being as prickly as she was at the beginning of season three, Emily being a touch more confident but still trying to forge her own non twin identity) but the central dynamic between Naomi/Emily remain very IC to me. I like how they work, Emily being giving but being firm when necessary, Naomi challenging Emily's shyness. Like most excellent N/E fics, I like how they're not soppy at all, but remain true the blonde pickly cunt with emotional barriers and the tiny introvert with aggressive tendencies. Unlike that.....skins novel, which is an abomination. YOU SHOULD HAVE WRITTEN IT INSTEAD (at least you wouldn't have had Naomi call Emily "her red headed angel")
In short (for me, anyway) I LOVES IITTTTTTTTTTTTTT *molests story*
I hope season four inspires you to write more stories *SUBTLE cough*
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Naomi, this is beyond amazing.
I loved it all. Naomi being a cunt, Emily getting her bitch on and obviously - KATIE.
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE
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Naomi is such a prick. At least she made the right decision in the end.
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