39. This Story, That Ending
Title: This Story, That Ending
For: yunsias
Rating: PG-13
Other pairings: bff!Xiumin/Baekhyun, Chen/D.O, Xiumin/Kris
Summary: A relationship is composed of two people with two perspectives.
When it crumbles, no one is truly at fault, just two sides waiting to be known.
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For: yunsias
Rating: PG-13
Other pairings: bff!Xiumin/Baekhyun, Chen/D.O, Xiumin/Kris
Summary: A relationship is composed of two people with two perspectives.
When it crumbles, no one is truly at fault, just two sides waiting to be known.
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I haven't read everything yet but I'm really intrigued by how you divided the story into two perspectives for us to view the same events!
I need to hug you to death after reveals, that is if you haven't broken my heart :(
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I AM A CRYING MESS AND IT'S REALLY BECAUSE OF YOU ;___________;
WHY COULDN'T THEY JUST SIT DOWN AND TALK
But this was a very good read. It was heartbreaking but not too heavy and I really like how you split the sections and omg the plot twist :(((( Minseok is broken and I love it. I love how he doesn't think he should be with Jongdae, even though he really wants to, and I love how he goes along with Kris even though he doesn't love him. Minseok is cruel to the both of them but in the same way, he's just doing everything to protect the both of them.
What they are - correct that, again - what they had been and it just feels so damn unfair when Minseok certainly knows what they will be but Jongdae can only think of what they could have become.
This hurts me so much, they could had have everything :(
I feel you wrote better in Minseok's section, there was a lot more emotions that were spelled out beautifully in your sentence structure like in this part:
Minseok chuckles. Kyungsoo smirks a little. They’re just running around ( ... )
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