Colins Story

[chene_sims333]

That guy keeps looking at me and it's creeping me out. Everyone knows he's gay and I don't want people getting the wrong idea about me if they catch him staring. I glance around the classroom to see that nobody is looking, satisfied that no one else can see I turn him and raise my eyebrows. He looks back at his math book

Comments

[tyrfish]

If anything i'm copying you, I had the idea for the coffeeshop AU about the same time as I read your post on your headcanons :P
Anyway its cool to read this and see what their relationship was like :3 and I like reading Colin's thoughts too! They're so cute awww ;_;
Also it was well written. The only thing I'd say is that sometimes you miss punctuation at the end of sentences, but that's about it :)

[chene_sims333]

Haha yeah but when i was posting this I thought to myself; anyone seeing these is going to think "carys posted something like this and two days later Tarina posts something similar.." So I just felt the need to point it out :P

Me and punctuation just don't get along, I am the worst grammar/punctuation student ever. it's amazing i'm able to write coherently at all :P

Thanks so much! My babies are cute aren't they? lol :P I'm looking forward to reading more of your AU, it's sooo good!

[tale_legacy]

Awww as sad as it was to hear Colin's thought process early on, it was written perfectly and totally believable and it was lovely to see how it really happened. Colin really is a sweetheart inside and out huh? ^-^

[chene_sims333]

Yeah I figured that in a tiny farming town most people would be a bit prejudiced in the 'This is the first time I've encountered a person like this' way and I didn't think Colin would be an exception.
Thank you so much! It was hard for me to get into Colins thoughts a lot of the time; like i wanted him to be attracted to Landen but I wasn't sure how that would come off in someone who has never been attracted to a man before. Idk, I'm gad you think it's realistic :)

Colin really is so sweet, it's great to be able to write him this way too.
Thank you so much :)