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pollutedlungs August 14 2012, 05:19:52 UTC
/ACTUALLY SOBBING OMFG
this is so melancholy oh god it's terribly frustrating gdi duizhang love your maknae.
idk I just felt like this is a really hopeless story on Tao's part. And it's awful because bby panda :c
awesome drabble, dear. it had a big impact for so few words. <3

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chens August 15 2012, 04:56:08 UTC
;____; that's how i feel when i watch tao in fancams and stuff. I mean like at the sm.art exhibition, he looked so, idk, down? :( but it was clear though that something was up. he didnt really look like his usual self, idk :|| hopeless taoris shipper lol

thank you so much for reading <3

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pollutedlungs August 15 2012, 07:00:59 UTC
i think they were all a bit on edge at the exhibition considering Chanyeol was practically blind. i still can't believe they made him go to that without being able to see.

<33333

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choamma August 14 2012, 06:19:36 UTC
ouch it must be hurt for Tao but he cleverly hid it /sobs/ or is it just me u.u
good job there! ^^

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chens August 15 2012, 04:56:40 UTC
lol he's pretty good at hiding things :3 thank you for reading!

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rainie_night August 15 2012, 03:16:42 UTC
This basically describes my frustration as a Taoris shipper.
I couldn't help but pity Tao because he insists that he's completely happy when it's obvious he's in serious denial.
It killed me when he described the relationships that Kris had with other band members that's so reminiscent of what they used to have.
I'm not much of a drabble reader, but I love this so much!
You managed to effectively represent emotions in 273 words that many are unable to in longer fanfics.

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chens August 15 2012, 05:01:18 UTC
same tbh :|| i maybe too much of a delusional taoris shipper, but idk, tao looked kinda off in the SM.ART exhibition. like idk he didn't really smile much and he was mostly to himself moping around. i hope he's okay ;___;

and i'm really really glad you like it! i'm not really fond of writing drabbles, because idk, i feel like they're so much more difficult to write than long fics otl. thank you so much for reading!

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onlysparrows August 15 2012, 05:52:49 UTC
I love how the title is kind of detached from the ending, so you're left wondering what's really going on. Is everything okay like the last paragraph says, or is Tao really just in denial to such a major extent that it carries into the narration?

Does that make any sense? OTL it's late.

But this was really powerful and believable in so few words, thank you for sharing!

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chens August 15 2012, 06:03:49 UTC
firstly, omg your icon. jino ilu ♥

yess that's exactly what i had intended on doing. is tao really fine or is he trying to convince himself that everything is peacy when in reality it's not? i'm glad you caught on when it's so late at night :3

thank you very much ♥

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momomoing August 15 2012, 19:11:29 UTC
awww so short but very sweet :).

Zitao knows he can’t be selfish, especially when Kris has to look after ten more people in their group.

I especially loved this part because it's really shows how Tao is growing up and maturing compared to his old self where he was so dependent on Kris

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chens August 15 2012, 19:53:54 UTC
that's pretty much the feeling i got from their interviews and such. bby is growing up ;_______; thank you, i'm glad you enjoyed it :3

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