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[chensuu]

We Choose Our Joys and Sorrows

Comments

[wildcat88]

I think what I enjoyed most about the story was how real the emotion was - John's fear that turned to despair, his guilt, Rodney blaming himself for leaving Sheppard behind, even the rage of the Dunedin thinking their PM had been murdered. Really nicely done.

[chensuu]

Wow, thanks. I'm glad you felt that the emotion rang true. That means a lot to me. I'm happy you enjoyed the story.

[chensuu]

Thank you very much. I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it and felt that the concepts I utlized worked well for the story. *smiles* Thanks again.

[bbuttercup]

Wonderful ending :o)

[chensuu]

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked the ending and enjoyed the story.

[titan5]

This was completely wonderful. John's pain and helplessness and hopelessness were so frighteningly real. And then the irony of living through hell just to be told you were dying . . . well, that was the real torture. I loved the ending - with John needing to be outside and Rodney coming to stay with him. My favorite sentence was Rodney's. "John is and always will be Atlantis to Rodney."

Oh, and I loved the way Rodney's prediction of how bad things can happen in five days kept coming up all through the story. It really tied the whole thing together.

[chensuu]

Thank you very much! I'm very happy that you liked the story. And that was my favorite line too! I love the relationship between these two characters!

[dear_sweet_lana]

Poor John! I really enjoyed reading the story. My favorite bit was when the North City people were so surprised that the East City blew them away!

[chensuu]

I'm happy you enjoyed it! Thanks very much.