Fanfiction: Sparkle - part4 (final)

[cheonbyeol]

Note: Part of 100 Super Junior Fanfics Challenge; theme: 22. Diamonds, SungminxKibum

Title: Spark
Pairings: Kimin, onesided!Kyumin, Yewook, bestfriends!Minwook, brothers!Kisung
Characters: Kibum, girl!Sungmin, Yesung, girl!Ryeowook, Kyuhyun
Genre: romance, fluff
Rating: PG-13
Length: four chapters (Allover word count: 7868, each ranging from ~1600

Comments

[anonymous]

most definitely cute! i'd suggest a beta reader for some parts but i thought it was adorable over all.

[cheonbyeol]

Thanks! ^^ BTW, why do you think I would need a beta? For the story, or the language usage? I'd like to know in what field I should improve. :)

[rizaisinair]

i like this kind of story, it is so sweet and make me happy
you should write more often

thank you for sharing :)

[cheonbyeol]

Aww, thank you. :) I'm happy I can make people happy. :)
I'm planning to write more, it's just not long ago I started with fanfictions. :)
Thanks for reading&commeting! :)

[rizaisinair]

your welcome :)

[miciatoby]

Hi ^^ I read your fic and i like it! It remind me J. Austen novel, i don't know why XD
Thank you to share with us ^^

[cheonbyeol]

Aww, thanks.^^ Jane Austen? LOL, I haven't even read from her, I don't know how she could influence me then! :)
No problem. :)

[purplelove2nee8]

I'm not really good with words, but I'm giving you a comment!

It's really sweet and simple but beautiful, really. Fics with Kibummie in it are very rare these days, and since he's one of the members people consider as you know, straight, he's not often included in fics. Maybe as a supporting character, but not the main one. He's still straight here, anyway. Haha!

The way you describe their personalities and the way they look and the scenes and everything is excellent.

And... you put some Yewook in it. I'm so happy, lol. XD

♥

[cheonbyeol]

Thank you so much, comments like this never miss to make my day. <3
Yeah, Kibum is rare in fics nowadays, people are less interested in him that he's been absent too long. :( And right, he's hard to imagine as a gay, but then, for example, Kangin is hard to imagine so too, but still, Kangteuk is popular. Oh, and it's not my reason for writing genderswitch. XD I thought that only this would fit it in this alternative universe.
Thanks, I'm always afraid that I get them wrong.^^
I'm happy I got the side pairing well too. :)

[mt_cute]

I read it and I love it
I love Kimin

[cheonbyeol]

Thank you for reading&commenting.~ :)