Outlier, Chapter 13

[cherimola]

Comments

[dpracket]

Oh, and I so wanted Luke to lick the cheese off Reid's fingers for him...heehee.

Yeah, I know it's too early for that, but the thought of it is just................................yeah.

[cherimola]

Don't think I didn't just scribble a note. ;)

[dpracket]

YES. :D

[alissablue]

DATE :D

I just knew that Luke was going to come after him. Knew it. That's so like him, especially when it comes to Reid, to dig deeper and deeper until he gets to the bottom of Reid things.

And babbling!Reid... I love it when Reid is like this, so awkward and un-Reid-like because of Luke. I'm so happy he stepped up and asked Luke (even if he did run away) and even happier that Luke said yes. :D

[cherimola]

Yay for making you happy! Sometimes it's good to be predictable. :) And for Reid to be out of his comfort zone. ;)

[ltklo]

So good. Glad that Luke somehow realized what Reid was asking. Reid was pulling away almost before it started :)

[cherimola]

Thanks! Luke is a smart one. Especially when he's motivated. ;)

[roganrules]

The band geek in me loved that you used the phrase "metronome monotony" when describing the sound of the rain. In general, I love your writing style because it makes it so easy to get lost in the fic and I cam picture the scenes in my mind.

I loved the boys being awkward this chapter. I am looking forward to reading about the date because that will probablybring more awkward moments for me to love. :D

I don't know if I have commented before, but I have been reading this fic from the beginning and love it. Back when all the drama in the comm happened, I had a couple convos with other members trying to get them to read the fic and let them know that even though it started with straight Reid it was definitely a Lure fic. :) I don't know if I convinced them or not, but I do imagine that there are more people reading than commenting because I am probably not the only person that tends to read and not comment for whatever reason, but still love the fic.

[cherimola]

Bless you for your lovely comment! And for your efforts on my behalf. :)

And my science geek hearts your band geek. ♥

[pheobe129129]

Wow, this is definitely one of the best LuRe fics I've ever read. Flawless is the only way to describe your writing as well as your characterisation of Luke, and overlooking the straight part, Reid. I've loved every word of this fic (except for the het sex but even that I was able to tolerate- Lol! How weird is it that I'm a straight female and het sex squicks me?). Anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter.

[cherimola]

I still haven't quite recovered from this perfect comment. THANK YOU.

And goodness knows I should have anticipated the squick-factor -- you think the het sex was hard to read? Try writing it. ;)