Comments | cherimola: First Love, Chapter 4

cherimola

First Love, Chapter 4

Sep 03, 2010 21:16

lure, rating:nc-17, luke/reid, first love, atwt, fan fiction

Comments 13

rtruffles September 4 2010, 21:25:10 UTC

Oh my god this was a perfect chapter. I love how even though Reid is so hurt and Luke is so scared they can't deny their connection. They are both so, so damaged.

cherimola September 4 2010, 21:39:52 UTC

Thank you! (and let the healing begin...)

ltklo September 5 2010, 19:17:42 UTC

So much pain behind the walls :(

cherimola September 5 2010, 19:28:56 UTC

Thanks for your comments! Yes, this is what was behind Reid's understanding façade. Luke has a bit of a mountain to climb.

shar_jere September 6 2010, 02:01:40 UTC

HMMMMMM THANKS SO MUCH GREAT CHAPTER ;0

snowmore September 6 2010, 02:54:27 UTC

Luke reached back for Reid’s hand. With what little strength he had left, he placed it over his heart.

Not crying. Nope. I'm not.

This was intense!

cherimola September 6 2010, 04:07:46 UTC

Sorry for the tears (or am I?)...but thanks for your lovely comments! Hope you enjoy the rest!

luvflix September 27 2010, 14:25:36 UTC

I literally cried at this part Finally, Luke saw behind the veil, saw what Reid had been so carefully protecting, so fiercely hiding. Saw the agony. Saw what a scream looked like,, omg the pain is so intense!