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alissablue September 5 2010, 03:18:50 UTC
It's almost morning here and I've just started reading it. I'm literally trying to tear myself away from my laptop and am finding it nearly impossible, because this story is soooo good.

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cherimola September 5 2010, 03:39:02 UTC
Very few things get between me and my sleep, so I'll take that as high praise :) Thanks for reading!

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ltklo September 5 2010, 19:33:33 UTC
Luke came with great hiccuping cries. They echoed off the tiles, resonating in Reid’s ears and throughout his body. Reid turned his own cries inward. His long shudders were silent. He collapsed on Luke’s back - his open mouth on his shoulder, his eyes squeezed shut.

The spray of the water washed away the tears.

I need something to wash away my tears.

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shar_jere September 6 2010, 02:03:28 UTC
AM SO IN LOVE WITH THIS FANFIC THANKS SO MUCH :p

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luvflix September 27 2010, 14:39:58 UTC
I love this phrase...At last, they were both naked. Not quite metaphorically, not yet. Luke still sensed that Reid wasn’t completely bare. But at least the chain mail was gone. - it's so beautifully poignant.

And I adored their first kiss back with each other - loved that it wasn't full of lust and tongues and passion, but a tentative re-entry back into what once was - beautiful!

And then after all that emotion...Luke smiled. “I hadn’t realized your expertise extended to this part of the body.”

“Only when the patient’s head is so often up his ass.” ROFLMAO!!!

And then the tears at the end - you're killing me here!

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marsabi March 24 2011, 23:30:14 UTC
This is better than my glass of wine that is waiting for me. Thud! My heart loves that Reid seems to already be willing to give Luke a real chance. I was expecting more anger or something. But love shower sex (have a small scene of my own coming in my next chapter with shower sex too lol ) and this was so good. It wasn't rushed and it was so deliberate and emotional and -I hope - healing. Wow!

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cherimola March 25 2011, 02:11:02 UTC
Better than wine -- I'm honored! :)

(have a small scene of my own coming in my next chapter with shower sex too lol )
*wags tail*

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