First Love, Chapter 9

[cherimola]

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[ltklo]

“No, no, not quite…more like…yes, more like, ‘only love.’ You know, as in, the first, the last.”
Lovely!

[shar_jere]

AAAAAWWW I JUST LOVED THAT ENDING :)

[snowmore]

more like, ‘only love.’ You know, as in, the first, the last.”

*tears up happily*

I love this chapter. While I love intimate scenes, I really enjoy scenes of them out and about and enjoying each other's company.

You couldn't have posted this series at a better time. :)

[luvflix]

I love that Luke had a conversation in his head with his penis ... Luke glanced down. Oh sure, he says jump and you say how high? Hmph, it’s as if you belong to him and not me (true). Focus…. ... LOVE IT!!!

And I found this weirdly satisfying ... And I keep expecting you to change your mind. To disappear. To send me back to my half-life. I guess I'm just glad to hear Luke isn't taking this reunion for granted, that he knows he still has a lot of emotional ground to cover before Reid accepts him back.

[marsabi]

I have all kinds of love for this chapter (twirls).

I loved Reid's conditions on the date , I loved the way Reid gave Luke affection in front of his friend , loved Luke with a hula hoop, and loved the entire chess game... Sorry I am basically lazy about quoting lines, but imagine I just quoted all these scenes back to you.

Aww, and Reid's been checking and googling Luke too. He still loves him. Luke must not ruin this last chance here! He really is believable as Reid's only love and that makes what he did (weepy) so hard...

[cherimola]

So glad you found it all believable! At the time, I was almost afraid to let them out of the hotel room. But how could I deny them the chance to experience the greatest city in the world? :)