First Love, Chapter 15

[cherimola]

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[shar_jere]

“I can help with that.” Luke remained spread on the stone. All attention was trained on Reid’s erection. Like a hawk watching a squirrel.HMMMMMMM HOT SEX AM SO LOVING THIS. JEAN.P DID NOT GIVE US ANY SEX BUT YOU DID THANKS SO MUCH :P

[cherimola]

Ha, thanks! Little did I suspect at the time that they'd be getting only fanfic sex. But now I do know, so watch out....

[snowmore]

Exquisite lovemaking. :)

[cherimola]

*blushes*

distended length

[authorsfriend]

1. Eww. Sticky.
2. Did you steal "distended length" from one of those spaghetti westerns I gave you in brown bags?

Re: distended length

[cherimola]

1. Really? That's what you took away from this chapter?
2. Aren't you glad I put them to good use?

[luvflix]

This is the chapter where I finally believed that Reid is going to able to accept Luke back ... When he spoke, his eyes remained closed. “It wasn’t supposed to be like this…I wasn’t supposed to tell you my room. You weren’t supposed to come in.” ... I love that Reid is almost admitting here how hurt he was, that he had had no intention of letting Luke back into to his life. It kind of justifies his hurt, rather than sweeping it under the carpet and saying "yeah sure you hurt me, but let's have sex anyway!" This feels so right.

[marsabi]

You're killing me (I'm with Luke there), this was a fantastic sex scene! Gah- falling on the floor. Again, I loved the anticipation building at first. That line about Luke trying for coy and failing - so good- so telling! When Reid admitted nothing had been what he expected- melting to the floor good! There were tons of great erotic lines (too many for my frazzled brain to quote), but I also loved Luke's wanting to be filled (emotionally too) and willing to trust Reid - AHH
Love it!

[cherimola]

*blushes* (for multiple reasons)

Thanks!