Comments | cherimola: Outlier, Chapter 6

cherimola

Outlier, Chapter 6

Feb 07, 2011 20:20

( your move, Reid )

lure, luke/reid, atwt, outlier, fan fiction

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cherimola February 12 2011, 03:33:51 UTC

Reid's on it. ;)

dpracket February 8 2011, 16:40:28 UTC

I love that this fic confuses me and intrigues me at the same time. I also love that I question what is Reid's reality and what isn't.

And, again, your writing style is incredible.

" He was sick of workers going through his stuff and cavalierly demolishing load-bearing walls." --- PERFECT description!

And the pill bug story...oh my...Reid as a sensitive little boy...omg...heart swells...

MORE, please!!!! :)

cherimola February 12 2011, 03:40:29 UTC

Thanks, luv! My heart kinda broke writing the pill bug story. And I was pretty pleased with the "load-bearing walls." :)

ganeshalemming February 8 2011, 18:38:51 UTC

Okay, this is funny and weird and confusing and Reid-snarky and Reid-dry and cheerfully out there, and I'm beginning to wonder who has the brain tumor (if there is one), Luke or Reid... I'll have to go back and re-read all the previous chapters and see if I can make sense of anything. I'll do so with a happy even if somewhat vacant smile. 8)

cherimola February 12 2011, 03:43:29 UTC

At times I'm sure it seems as if the author's the one with the brain tumor. ;)

chameleonen February 8 2011, 19:14:07 UTC

Hmmm Hmmm Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm..... Is this going to be a going to be a story about a brain tumor or just Luke traveling between two universes?? I'm so exited... Jumping up and down as a 11 year old girl.. (that means that I'm so exited to read the rest of this story) ;)

<3 and x

cherimola February 12 2011, 03:38:23 UTC

You definitely win for most creative guess! :)

divin4 February 10 2011, 15:36:33 UTC

Ok...so, originally I stayed away from this fic...thinking it just wasn't for me. Well, I tried to stay away....but, damn it, you just tell a great story.

Reason I'm commenting... I actually gasped out loud at the end of this chapter, it's that good.

I am an idiot for doubting your ability to draw me in, no matter what the storyline. I'm going to stop being and idiot now and say thanks...another great story. I'll just get in line with everyone else and wait for an update.

cherimola February 12 2011, 03:45:48 UTC

Glad to see you again! ♥ I'm actually surprised more people haven't stayed away. :) This certainly ain't First Love. But I promise it'll be just as satisfying...