Ten Tremont - Chapter 4

[chering]

In which Marc sees a blonde....

Comments

[tosca15]

Wonderful! I'm totally invested in this story, and you know me, I don't invest easily. What a refreshing viewpoint!

[chering]

Well, we know your weak spots. It is fun, however, to look through a new set of eyes at our boys. It's so damn hot in my office right now, I'm taking the laptop downstairs to read the news about your mayor.

[chering]

Part 5 should be coming at you tomorrow. Glad you like it and that Marc has a fan. He's a sweetheart.

[herewego15]

This was a fun chapter. I liked how the guys don't know anything about Brian and that they are making up their own stories!

Plus these guys are so adorable together. I really love the POV's!

Good job Ladies ♥

[fansee]

Thanks. It's a really fun fic to write. FanSee

[arwensong]

Ahh, I now love both of these guys! You're right, the doc is nothing like Dr. Dave, lol! He is adorable too! His personality comes through great in this chapter. I love his different way of observing versus Adrian's...like he is doing a lab report but with a wry side commentary. Great job of distinquishing the two men.

The bed hog observations are sweet and loving too. Wonderful writing; you convey so much with a few choice phrases.

Arwen

[chering]

Thank you for your thoughtful comments. Traditionally, each one of us writes a different guy so it's pretty easy to give them very distinct personalities! What is interesting to me is to see her personality shine through Marc's like it usually does through her writing of Justin. I hit the jackpot when I teamed up with her.

[spike7451]

Such a joy to read this fic. :)

Well Marc's conscience didn't bother him that much, I think we now have two voyeurs. LOL!

And he sussed out Lindsey pretty darn quick too.