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Ten Tremont - Chapter 13

Sep 01, 2009 18:46

In which Marc witnesses a crime....

( Chapter 13 )

Comments 17

shadownyc September 2 2009, 00:00:43 UTC

That was a great parallel chapter. I wish Adrian had gotten the last laugh on his brother, but this was a bit better.

chering September 2 2009, 01:29:19 UTC

Thanks for commenting Shadow! It's been so long since I've written, it's nice to know some of our original readers are still with us. Hope you are feeling well?

6frog September 2 2009, 00:55:20 UTC

Every time I read a chapter of this fic I find my spirits lift. You really are wonderful.

Love from 6frog

chering September 2 2009, 01:29:56 UTC

Aww, that's so nice of you. Glad we could play a small part in brightening your day!

mysid September 2 2009, 02:43:09 UTC

A connection? Lord help help Adrian and Marc if there is. They're in for a hell of bumpy ride!

chering September 2 2009, 03:36:59 UTC

Very well put!

teatotaller September 2 2009, 03:42:23 UTC

If only they had an inkling of what happened in NY!

chering September 2 2009, 05:39:04 UTC

Yes, while they are privy to many things we didn't get to see, we do have it up on them there!

revlisacat September 2 2009, 07:27:03 UTC

Shadow is right -- this is a great parallel chapter! I was also glad to see the back of Jeff (and don't we all have family members we want to forget?). It's also nice to see Brian and Justin together after Justin's little field trip.

Yup, life is much better when your partner is around and conflict is at bay...

chering September 2 2009, 14:13:08 UTC

Poor Adrian has a bunch of those family members. Thanks so much for commenting!