There that is

[cherokee_se7en]

So this is the first draft of the opening scene for This Is A Movie. I was hoping to get some feedback from you's guys. I was hoping to throw in a song in there somewhere written and performed by us. Trey Parker and Matt Stone style, baby

Comments

[hurt07]

it seems contrived...i need more

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[pauline_oster]

i can picture everything happening. but you need to write some more of it, cause that was like a minute of a movie. not enough to judge it. it was alright, though.

[hollywood_stef]

That's more like 10 seconds of a movie. I really like the idea of it, and I think from what you've told me its going to turn out really good, but at this point babe, there's not enough to nitpick about.
I definately like the mention of shooting in Toronto and shot of the CN Tower, clever.

[running_forhome]

good start, Andy -
the style is about what I was hoping for (seems, anyway)
it's funny.
Keep going.
-fearless leader

[zerrety]

I like the guy selling newspapers beside the cn tower, Funny