Fic! AHAHAHAHA--wait, its sad :(

[cherprudence]

I wrote this two nights ago. Its lame and not as depresing as it should be ^^; Uhm, any suggestions would be great ^^;;; *has no confidence*

Unwanted
Rating: PG-13
Warning: ANGST, bad writing, suicidal character, unbeta’d
Summary: Marui, the lost lamb of Rikkaidai, finds himself overwhellmed

Comments

[kagami_mirror]

You are ebil for nearly making your senpai cry ;o; *huggles*

[cherprudence]

Eee~! gomen Senpaii *snugs* But that also means it didnt suck.. maybe? ^_~

[yuki_martinet]

Nope, it definitely did not suck <333

[cherprudence]

<33333 sankyuu senpaiii~!

[roll]

Wow.

T____________T Maruiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!

*sob*

[cherprudence]

*Clings* HE ISNT REALLY THAT SAD!!

*hearts* sankyuu for commenting~!

[sarradp]

Wow that is sad! *hugs* Imma try and catch up with your chars...but even when i have no clue what's going on, its good!

[cherprudence]

Eee~! Sankyuu. Marui really isnt this sad in the rps XD but he just seemed like a good victem ^_^

[hematite_dragon]

you may say it was badly written, but I think it was... beautiful actually. I'm not familiar with these characters, but even without knowing them I could feel marui's pain, you wrote it well *bearhugs* you rocksaur (: *punches you in the arm* but no fair making kimmie misty eyed ;)

[cherprudence]

*Tears* eee~! I'm glad you liked iiitt!! Sankyuu for commenting, too! I promise there is happy good times with the smexyness in the next one I post ^__^ *snugs~!*

[hematite_dragon]

oooo, smexyness! :D *excited* smexyness is always good ;) *returns snug!*

[cherprudence]

Ho ho ho, ohh yeahh XD

[soloproject]

Bad Birdy! Making Jackal-muse cry and feel guilty :OOO~

But you are such love and I love this fic...I totally eeped and wept a bit. ;__;

*fangirls you*

[cherprudence]

*loves!* Gomenn~! Marui loves his Jackal, I promise~!

*blushies* glad you liked ^^ I promise fun luvluv fics in the fewchur ^__^