Love Knot 4

[cherry_dawn]

okay~ i shall continue now since i'm basically pissed off at the whole world...
screw my life!

Comments

[tenshii_chan]

yey! found my palce.. hmm,, a little constrict there huh?,.
but this one lacked emotions..i could barely feel what was mayu thinking,, but then, this chapter is very detailed when it comes to Jun's feelings.. ganbare dear^^

[kouchan_3194]

yes i will!
thank you~

[tenshii_chan]

^^ will wait for the next one^^

[ruilian_thatsme]

Not bad. i still liked it.^^ can barely wait for what's gonna happen next, i'll probably be busy myself real soon too. there are just a few spelling errors but it's still understandable. Ganbarre!

[kouchan_3194]

spelling errors?? ahh! i apologize for that then... i just kept on typing without checking...

glad you liked it

[ruilian_thatsme]

iya, sugoi desu.. daijoubu. i make those mistakes too.. ^^ will be anticipating^^

[kouchan_3194]

what spelling errors?? i tried to check it by copy and paste the whole post into Word but there wasn't any big spelling errors... was it fiance??

[dcsprouse001]

More emotions! And details! :]
I really liked this chapter because to me, there was a good balance of emotions and details. Especially, in the part where Akanishi and Mayu were hugging each other. :]

[kouchan_3194]

ahh?? yes??

yeah!!! thank you!! i hope i'll improve more!!! thank you~