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[One Shot] Bubblegum

May 25, 2011 14:04

Title: Bubblegum

Rating: K+

Word Count: 1,733

Disclaimers: I do not own any of the characters used here. They belong to their respective owners, namely the creators of Eyeshield 21.

Summary: All it takes is an extra pack of bubblegum to get Hiruma in an amusing situation he's not likely to forget anytime soon.

Notes: I LIIIIIIVE!! *gets shot* ( Read more... )

fandom: eyeshield 21, fanfic, pairing: hirumamo

Comments 9

dayofcaligula May 25 2011, 11:47:47 UTC

This is all sorts of lovely! You see, I've been into their college days so much I forgot how refreshing and raw it is in high school.

Very sweet fluff. I love!

cherry_tiger May 26 2011, 01:29:03 UTC

I know how you feel! Lately all fic ideas that I have involve them being in college. But when I thought about the "bubblegum" prompt, it brought me back to realize how they both started out in the beginning and the steps they took to finally establish this great trust. I guess regardless of which phase, this pairing never fails to make me squee. <3

Really glad you enjoyed this. Thank you!

honey_bee89 June 1 2011, 15:07:05 UTC

Aww, thank you so much for this lovely gift! I was insanely happy when I saw it. I probably looked pretty daft grinning from ear to ear in McDonald’s (and blushing to boot! I blush whenever I’m ecstatically happy. XD), but I don’t care. lol. I’m so glad I decided to quickly check out the Hirumamo Community before my laptop battery died. I don’t think I’ve ever copy and pasted anything so fast. XD

Anyway, you did a wonderful job with the prompt! Hiruma was such a tease to poor Mamori. Hehe. I’m glad he still took a moment to satisfy her curiosity, though. That was nice of him (probably not the most suitable word to use for him, but there’s no denying that he does have his nice moments). ♥ And I also imagine Mamori not being too keen on chewing gum, so that’s a very good reason for why she didn’t know how to blow bubbles. *Nods* Her sense of accomplishment at creating a small bubble was very cute, by the way. I’m sure Hiruma will look back on that moment later in life with fondness. ;P

Now there’s an idea! Hiruma and Mamori in their ( ... )

cherry_tiger June 2 2011, 04:06:31 UTC

Hahahaha! Wow, I'm so so glad that you enjoyed this! And don't worry about looking foolish in a public place, I'm known for even squeeing loudly in a public place like McDonalds. So blushing shouldn't be that bad... but hey, at least you're happy!

Yeah, I haven't written a teasing Hiruma for a long while now. It was really fun to get back into the old Deimon days too! I'm probably gonna head back into writing about their Saikyoudai days soon enough. But I'm really glad you like all those moments! ^^

Yes, do write that fic when you get the time! ^^

And this is your present, so you're free to link it anywhere you like, just as long as I'm credited. ^^ I'm really glad that you enjoyed this!

bar_ohki June 2 2011, 03:42:09 UTC

She asks an innocent question for an unexpected reason and he humors her. Love the concept, fits them perfectly.

cherry_tiger June 2 2011, 04:08:22 UTC

Haha! Thanks! I still owe you your birthday fic and I'm very, very sorry it's taking so long. I'm just having issues with certain aspects of the story and I'm hoping my beta will help point out if there's something wrong with what I've written. In which I MUST poke her about it soon. -____-

bar_ohki June 2 2011, 04:10:01 UTC

It's alright, I'm seeing it as a birthday-congratulations on passing Spring Term thing. My school year's ending so yeah.

cherry_tiger June 2 2011, 04:19:32 UTC

Awesome!! ^^ Congrats on that! Hopefully your studies have been going well. You've been pretty busy lately after all.

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