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[Fanfic] Remember [Chapter 7]

Oct 01, 2011 08:35

Title: Remember [Chapter 7]

Rating: T

Fandom: Eyeshield 21/CLAMP (Crossover)

Disclaimers: I do not own any of the characters used here. They belong to their respective owners, namely Riichiro Inagaki and Yuusuke Murata for Eyeshield 21 and CLAMP.

Summary: Anezaki Mamori wakes up to realize that she has been thrown into a different world with no ( Read more... )

fandom: clamp, fandom: eyeshield 21, fanfic, pairing: hirumamo, remember

Comments 8

immortalizepain October 13 2011, 01:23:40 UTC

yatta!!! after a lot of months painstakingly waiting for another sequel to this fic, i really am so glad to see another update and to know that you won't be abandoning this fic, cherry ( ... )

cherry_tiger October 13 2011, 02:54:57 UTC

I apologize for how long this took! I know you were one of the few who really enjoyed this fic. I really didn't mean to abandong this fic... but I'm glad to see that it's still welcomed with open arms!

Awesome! I'm so glad you're checking out xxxHolic and Tsubasa! They're really pretty good, and I hope you continue to enjoy it. And yes, based on those two series, Hiruma obviously paid a price to get there and it'll be more apparent on what exactly that price was as the story progresses (though I think you have a good guess on what that is if you follow Tsubasa... XD You were very close with your comments too).

Haha! I love your lengthy comment! It makes me ridiculously happy to see how much you're enjoying this fic. I'm glad I wrote that moment where Mamori couldn't see the players good enough. I'm just glad that I've written it well enough for you to enjoy it this much so far. So thank you for this lovely comment and look out for the next chapter! I'll be working on it soon enough! ^^

immortalizepain October 13 2011, 04:36:50 UTC

hmmm, i'm close huh? I bet Sakura helped the both of them cause their situation was much similar as that of hers. But is it really proper for Sakura to act like Yuko? I mean when asking for the trade. I'm wondering what could be the epic reasons to why Mamori's memory need to disappear ( ... )

cherry_tiger October 13 2011, 06:41:04 UTC

Well, there's a reason why Yuuko isn't in this story, and I think that as you keep reading on with xxxHolic, you'll eventually find out sooner or later. But yes, Sakura is helping mostly because she understands Hiruma's pain.

Yeah, I keep trying to write out how Hiruma looks like whenever he sees these moments where Mamori doesn't remember a lot of important things, but it's hard to put it into words. Especially since I'm writing mostly from Mamori's perspective. And yes, there's still a lot more hardship before them.

Hahahaha! I never thought about getting something like Mokona to accompany them. But I will give you this, Cerberus will be making an appearance sometime in the next few chapters. Look out for that. XD

Aww, thank you! Some of the scenes in this chapter were inspired by a dream I had, and I worked it all out from there. I'm really glad that you enjoyed this, and I can only hope the upcoming chapters will be just as interesting for you!

Thank you so much for your lovely comment!

Thread 6

siyaaphenan October 20 2011, 17:00:59 UTC

Traveling in subconsciousness and fighting with it for returning lost memory. It is very intriguing..
Cerberus like Mokona in the next chapters? I can't imagine this! XD It's too funny! XDD
I like your description of Hiruma's reaction when some of Mamori's memories are coming back but she still hasn't remembered him. I think you wrote it well.
I was frightened in a moment with hanging mannequins. Waa.. >< And tense anxiety of game... It was very interesting =)
I don't want to think about a price that Hiruma must pay... I hope that all will be alright.
I'm your fan, really =)

cherry_tiger October 21 2011, 06:47:06 UTC

Hahaha! Nah, Cerberus will be nothing like Mokona, though he will be a little more subdued. There's not a lot of jokes or funny moments in this fic, but I hope you can enjoy this all the same.

I'm really glad I could write all this well for you to enjoy it. I was inspired to write the hanging mannequins thanks to a dream I had, so I'm glad it came out well.

And as Sakura is known for saying, "Everything will be all right." So will Hiruma.

Thank you so much! I'm really, really glad to see you enjoying my work! ^^