[One Shot] The Mystery on Christmas Day

[cherry_tiger]

Title: The Mystery on Christmas Day

Rating: K+

Word Count: 860

Disclaimers: I do not own any of the characters used here. They belong to their respective owners, namely the creators of Eyeshield 21.

Summary: Ever since Mamori joined the Devil Bats, she would receive an anonymous present on Christmas that sent those around her in a frenzy. Who

Comments

[bar_ohki]

Of course he's getting something out of this, its just not clear.

Excellent story.

[cherry_tiger]

Thank you! Yeah, it's pretty much written from the perspective of an outsider, so a lot of the inside details are hidden. XD I'm glad you enjoyed this though!

[dayofcaligula]

Ohoho, I find this very entertaining because it can go from sweet to romantic to naughty to saucy and I love that so much.

Anyway, the perspective in writing is nice! My characters tend to be immensely conversational all the time that my narrative is always lacking. You gave me an idea, I might try this style in Unsui/Karin, but I just don't know the story yet.

[cherry_tiger]

Hahahaha! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Yeah, as I was writing it, I was amused at how the pace changes and how it worked... then worried that it wouldn't work for everyone. ^^;;; But so far so good! I'll definitely work on writing this style better.

And I'm also glad to hear you'll be trying out this style for Unsui/Karin! I'm definitely looking forward to it! ^^

[haqin]

that's so sweet! to think Hiruma will do things just for mamori. But I want to know what could be the answer of the last question. ;)

[cherry_tiger]

Glad you liked it! Hehehe! I purposely left the last question open so that HiruMamo fans are welcome to interpret it in any way that they want. What would Mamori give Hiruma that kept him giving something to her constantly on Christmas? Whatever it is in your mind, if it makes you happy as a HiruMamo fan, then I've done my job. ^^