[Fanfic] Wait For Me [Chapter 12 - Bonus]

[cherry_tiger]

Title: Wait For Me [Chapter 12 - Bonus]

Rating: M (for this bonus chapter only)

Disclaimers: I do not own any of the characters used here. They belong to their respective owners, namely the creators of Eyeshield 21.

Summary: A sequel to my earlier fic, Gravity. Time is moving faster than before, and one question will be on the mind's of both

Comments

[venomous_sakura]

Okay, now Tiger, i don't care if you think that i'm a prev
but, this smut version was ehm, blowing my mind?

i've been reading any kind of smut Hirumamo,
and this is one of the best in my list. no doubt about it...

still, i find it a little bit amusing at part 'as Mamori held his shaft in his hand, stroking and rubbing it gently, feeling it grow bigger in her hand'
sorry, i just try to imagine Hiruma's face

and i was rereading this again(for the third time XD)when my eyes began to teary again*sob

oh man, are you a writer of a book?

[cherry_tiger]

Oh, it's really not that great really! If you want really good smut fic, I suggest checking out bifacial_ler's fics. Her smut fics are really the best!

And yes, I know that line is kinda awkward, but I did it to show Mamori wasn't afraid of him at all. XD I'm sorry if it pulled you out of the moment! I'll be sure to write this better next time! And if you ask me, I'm pretty sure Hiruma enjoyed it. XD (Hahahaha, bad Cherry! Don't say such things!)

I'm so, so glad that this chapter was enjoyable though, and that you really felt the character's feelings. No, I am not a writer of a book. But it really is my dream to be one someday, so I'm doing my best when it comes to fic writing. So your comments are really uplifting for me! Thank you so much!

[dayofcaligula]

This chapter is filled with the sweets!

As for the smut, it's not as if I'm an expert so this shall have no bearing whatsoever, but I have something against inserting in thoughts in between the process. But this isn't bad!

[cherry_tiger]

I'm sorry about inserting thoughts in between, I thought of using that to show that the smut had something else going on, rather than them... you know... getting it on. XD It's not a style many would like, I know, so I apologise for that.

But I'm glad you enjoyed this though! Onwards to the ending then! 8D

<3

[ext_1115859]

GIRL U NEVER SEIZE TO AMAZE ME!i love ur stories they are so freaken cute! cant wait till the next chapter

I like it

[fanofyourwork]

Best chapter so far :D I love how amazingly you wrote the conversations between them ...Wow, You made Hiruma to say such words without changing his personality, it was still him ! =O *made my heart skip a beat*... The smut was beautiful (aww, they helped each other, especially Mamori ), it was so elegant it suited both of them perfectly ...Thank you so much for your hard work , I really enjoyed it ^^