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Fic: The Shape of a Sooner State [Fringe]

Jan 04, 2011 00:16

Title: The Shape of a Sooner State
Author: cherryice
Fandom: Fringe
Notes: Written for brodeurbunny30 in Yuletide 2010. Many thanks to kuwdora and sprat for beta. Spoilers through 3x9, Marionette. Originally posted at Archive of Our Own.

It is the little things that are hardest to remember.

( The Shape of a Sooner State )

yuletide, fic, fringe

Comments 29

hollywoodgrrl January 20 2011, 04:44:47 UTC

THIS FIC IS A PIECE OF ART!!! Not only does it explore the most fascinating thing on Fringe (yes I'm extremely biased since I live and breathe Olivia Dunham, but come on, what's better than one Olivia Dunham? TWO OLIVIA DUNHAMS!!!) it does so in the most dramatic and compelling way. The words flow seamlessly and the mood (oh how the mood is important in these types of stories) is remarkable. It's just stunning writing and now I'm just all GIMME MORE! Brilliant job. *happy sigh*

cherryice January 30 2011, 04:27:30 UTC

ART! :D :D That is a high compliment indeed, thank you! One Olivia was fascinating to vid about, and two Olivias were even more fascinating to write about.

rowofstars January 22 2011, 19:50:03 UTC

Gorgeous, flawless, stunning fic. The parallels and the differences between two Olivias is so striking and I love the way you formatted each section. Marvelous.

cherryice January 30 2011, 04:27:49 UTC

Thank you ever so much.

beccatoria January 22 2011, 20:25:28 UTC

OMGS AMAZING.

I mean, the whole thing is just beautiful, but I think the part that made me take in my breath was the section on the gun - that Olivia never became a sharpshooter because of how she first came to use one. That's an incredible idea.

cherryice January 30 2011, 04:31:17 UTC

Thank you kindly. There are just so many possibilities when you look at the Olivias, and I am glad some of them resonated.

sarbear12456 January 22 2011, 21:59:54 UTC

OMG *is speechless*

Ditto all the comments above. This was great, well structured and goes a long way to explaining the motives of several characters but most especially AltLivia. And that's done well because you've written it because their thoughts flow down similar, but still slightly different, paths. AltLivia is a characters we're not sure if we should hate, and this goes a lot into exploring that. It was beautiful.

*downloads to eReader*

cherryice January 30 2011, 04:32:21 UTC

Thank you ever so much. I really wanted to set up separate but distinct cadences for them, and I'm so glad that the mirroring worked for you.

maldeluxx January 22 2011, 22:48:53 UTC

Very intense, kind of bouncing :) I liked it

cherryice January 30 2011, 04:33:14 UTC

Thank you for reading.