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[Fic] Last to Know - The Gazette - Reita x Ruki - o12/?

Jul 28, 2008 17:20

Title:Last to Know
Chapters: 12/?
Author:cherryrazor and neopollyGenre:angst/romance, smut ( Read more... )

Comments 72

mizusu_chan July 28 2008, 19:38:48 UTC

*runs to hug you* Finally an update! And I loved it, too!
Don't hate me for what I'm about to say but it's just my thoughts: if Naoko thinks Reita's the cheater and places all the blame on him then she's no better. Seriously, how can she accuse Reita for lying if she kissed Kai back and refuses to admit it to Reita when demanding him to come clean? 'Cause if you kiss someone else when you're in a relationship then that's still cheating.
The messaging texts were really amusing; they (N&K) click so well with each other. Shame that they didn't hook up before she did with Rei.
And the final... Heart-breaking. That's the only word I could think of when reading. Sulking and miserable Ruki is a sad sight to see. *deathglares at Reita, sending daggers his way* Just because Rei can't think of anything else than a 'safe ground' doesn't mean everyone else are all happy-smiley. I'm still fuming over the fact that he pushed Ruki away even if the little one confessed his love towards him...
*sends your plot bunnies lots of carrots and hay*

cherryrazor July 28 2008, 19:49:24 UTC

*hugs back*
Yes.. finally. Took us long enough, huh?
Aww! Thank you! ^^

We don't hate you for what you said. Actually I think my opinion on the matter is pretty much along the lines that yours are. Naoko did cheat on Reita, but what Reita did was far worse than what Naoko did and for what it counts it was a spur of the moment thing.
The messaging was great fun to write. The text just flowed out onto the screen xDD It really is a shame that they didn't hook up before. They would make a great couple.
Sulking and miserable Ruki is really a sad sight, but what doesn't kill us makes us stronger (or hurts like a bitch).

The plot bunnies thank you! And so do we ♥

mizusu_chan July 28 2008, 20:14:46 UTC

Well, yeah... I was already beginning to worry if something bad had happened to you...

I didn't even think about justifying neither of their actions; just a kiss is almost nothing compared to the full-on sleeping with someone else. I was just wondering that if Naoko had admitted the kiss, Reita might have felt less guilty about cheating on her and more crappy about hurting Ru and then maybe he'd patch things up with Ruki. But that was just wishful thinking I guess...
'Course they would! It might be their personalities, or maybe karma or whatever but there's something sizzling between the two. It's as if the yin/yang if you understand what I'm seeing.
No no, I disagree - it hurts like 8 bitches, all at once. Not something you'd want to go through. After that slight numbness takes over until you accept whatever happened and then after some time you'd feel normal again and say that line with a shrug. <-- Five steps to overcome a heartbreak, by me.

You're very welcome ^^ *pets the bunnies*

cherryrazor July 28 2008, 20:22:54 UTC

I keep updating my journal and I've mentioned this fic there a couple of times ,but it really did take us a while to write this. It was just so hard to write for some odd reason.

I guess you're right about that, but it might be a bit too late for that. And we're still not sure what's going to happen so anything is possible.

I know what you mean about Kai and Naoko. It does seem that way.

Ok.. So it hurts like 8 bitches and a jackhammer.

shizuka_no_yume July 28 2008, 19:41:25 UTC

...*peeks out from shadows* The lurker feels a need to comment! 8D

Glad there was another update on this! :3 It really boosted my own inspiration, actually xD Thank you!

I like this story - it does seem real in a way. And I like how you let the characters have weaknesses. (:
keep up the good work!

cherryrazor July 28 2008, 19:53:32 UTC

Ha! We found you out!
Lurkers are very much appreciated xD
It did? o.O Wow!
We've tried to make the characters as real as possible and it's always nice to hear that we've succeeded in what we're aiming for.
No.. thank you for commenting :D

hyacinthdreams July 28 2008, 21:06:48 UTC

Wahhhh I'm so glad you updated!! This wasn't a horrible chapter at all! I loved it..it was slightly angsty and very interesting! I can't wait for moreee :3 I feel sorry for Hayate, though, somehow it feels that he's the only one who's going to be left alone in the end XD And I really felt sorry for Ruki in this chapter *huggles Ruki*
Another reason why I love this fic so much is that I can relate to it a lot and sympathize with Reita because I know what it feels like when you still love someone but all the butterflies and everything is gone and you just don't know what to do..it's so horrible ;__; anyway..I'm loving this and please updates soon! *feeds plot bunnies some more* :3

cherryrazor July 28 2008, 21:21:59 UTC

Awww! That's so very sweet of you ^_^ I guess our opinions differ, huh? xD

I'm glad that even Hayate has gained a few sympathizers since he's a really nice guy. There is a foreboding sense of dread coming his way, isn't there? But then again you never know.. there are a lot of ways this fic could turn out. xp
Writing Ruki in this chapter was particularly hard for some odd reason. I felt terrible for him.
I know how that feels too. My ex and I were together for almost 5 years and during the last year we went downhill and fast, so Reita's situation is very much real.

Thank you so so much for the lovely comment^_^ It made us really happy. =D *huggles plot bunnies*

neko_mikyo July 28 2008, 22:11:57 UTC

Yay! update~
It ain't crap my dear (or dears? O_o) This chapter was full of events.. or.. something! xD (mind is beeping "empty")
Poor lil Ruki.. *hugs Ruki* And poor Hayate too~
But for muaa.. i like too much Reituki, so i really want to see more of that! x3 *jumps on the chair*

Oi! no AoixUru here.. xD *LMAO*
And Naokos & Kais messages were so good and funny x'D Roses for ya for those text messages.. ;D *throws roses to cherryrazor*

Btw.. i'm pale as.. dunno what but well so pale that i could be dead with my paleness..
maybe it's because i always am wake all night.. and today the whole day my nose has been bleeding.. :S
i have sticked paper in to my nose for make it stop.. xD

and.... waiting for the next chapter!~ (aina ilo nähdä että teiltä on tullut uusi osa.. ;D *halaus*)

cherryrazor July 28 2008, 22:22:31 UTC

I think it's dears. I post it on my journal, but neopolly is as much involved in the writing process as me. Thank you very much! We're glad that you enjoyed it.

There wasn't any Reituki in this chapter and no AoixUru either xDD They're taking a break.. sort of.. They've been helping me with my one-shots. I've been in a writing frenzy, but not with this one.

*gathers roses* Oh.. hold up.. wait a minute.. what makes you think it was me that wrote the whole text message thingie? o.O
I'm glad you liked them though. xD

I'm up really late too. I go to bed at like 4 in the morning and get up at around 10.. and I sit inside.. it doesn't matter if I'm working or at home. The only time I go out is for a smoke. xDD

Kiitos kauhiasti! On mukavaa kuulla että pidit tästäkin luvusta. *halaus*

neko_mikyo July 28 2008, 22:47:00 UTC

Enjoy? ... ENJOY! I LOVED IT! it was more then only enjoying! :D (ok i guess i'm little "over my head" now xD)

Ok.. umm.. *throws roses to neopolly* there! ;D

Hahah.. me gonna win you at that when going to sleep.. xD i go to bed at 06-10 xD and i wake up almost every day at 12..
oh same here.. i'm always inside.. :S My mom is saying to me that i should go out for take fresh air but i'm stuck to my laptop or just being lazy and just sit all day in my room or in my brothers room x3 and my only time when i go out is if my mom MAKES me go with the dogs x'3

Ainahan mie pidän.. ;D *isorutistus* :3

cherryrazor July 28 2008, 23:00:09 UTC

Ok ok. We're glad the you loved it xp Happy?

Well I think it's nice that neopolly gets roses too. I mean she works on this fic as much as I do. =D

I'm actually thinking of going to bed right about now.. I'm sooooo tired. Dunno why though.
Oh I go out, but I do sit inside a lot too, the only thing is that I don't need a tan xDD I'm naturally tanned.

sabersenshi July 28 2008, 23:45:39 UTC

*cackles insanely*
OH.MY.GazettE!!!
This chapter is totally nutz! I love it!!!
What you two just did...
*squeals*
*flails*
I would love to see that particular expression on Reita's face..the mix between a kicked and overjoyed puppy..that is just so....CUTE ( ... )

cherryrazor July 29 2008, 08:16:44 UTC

*glomps you*
Saber!
Yay! Glad you thought so 'cause we sure didn't. We weren't really satisfied with this chapter.

I'd love to see that expression on his face too. I bet neopolly would too.
I had a great time writing the text message bit. Kai and Naoko muses made me write it. Kai was threatening me with his drumsticks :'(
I think Naoko should have fessed up too, but she didn't. I guess she thinks that it's no big deal after what Reita did to her. It really would have been interesting to see what Reita would have thought if he knew what happened.

I feel terrible for Ruki and Hayate too. Reita deserves a little smacking around for what he did and for not realizing it.
I'm sure you do ;p

Awww! We love you too! *hugs back* ♥ ♥

Thank you sooo much for the comment! It made my morning^____^