Disney RPF: Disentanglement (Demi/Selena, NC17)

[cherryroad]

Disentanglement
Disney RPF. Demi/Selena, NC17, ~3000 words.
prompt: Demi/Selena. hot jealousy sex. Dom!Demi. selena tells demi she had sex with taylor lautner so Demi in a jealous rage shows up at selena's hotel room in canada and uses her strap-on to put Taylor to shame. at tweendom_anon. Erase 'hot' and the general dom-ness the prompt implies, and you've got

Comments

[cherryroad]

I'm such a sap, I can't even keep a prompt literal, LOL. I'm really glad you enjoyed this! Thank you so much for the lovely feedback. :D

[likecharity]

Oh, this is awesome. Guhhh. I think I might love jealous!Demi. And sneaky!Selena, haha. So glad she didn't actually sleep with Taylor!

The sex is hot, the characterisation is spot-on, and I love the It's not a big deal/It's kind of a big deal thing you did at the beginning and the end. :D

[eternal_tempest]

I concur with the *thud*.

[eternal_tempest]

It was really good, and at the end it was actually cute haha!
~Tempe

[cherryroad]

Thank you so much! I have this weird irrational hatred of serious drama, and it tends to seep through my writing when I'm not paying attention.

[fredonica]

Whoa. That was one of the hottest smut fics I've ever read (and the first with two girls)! My iTunes was playing nothing but Selena, Demi and Tinted Windows' music and it was just PERFECT.

Thank you!

[cherryroad]

:D I love it when I start reading something and everything just sort of clicks.

Thank you so very much for the comment! I'm really glad this didn't (seem to) put you off femslash--it is a wonderful, wonderful thing.