Cascade

[cherryshot]

Title: Cascade
Pairing: HeeTeuk / TeukChul
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Heechul was feeling the effects of falling into pleasure too great to control.

Comments

[theoogtree]

sadhjgsglsjfghs Hi.
I wasnt going to read this
At first
Because of the Teukchul
But then I was like, "Hey, that icon looks familiar. :O Its Cherryshot! *reads*
And its like really good :D
This is the first Teukchul Ive read that actually makes any sort of sense XD
The ending doesnt suck, its just like randomly corny.
Which is a good thing. XD
*claps*

[cherryshot]

Hii~
:'D glad you liked it, even if it wasn't your preferred pairing :)
(Though, I really,really need to write some KangTeuk soon.. Too much 83-line going on in my computer :D)
Yay, it made sense, though the ending is indeed, corny.
But I was tired and wanted to finish it so.. corny it came.

Thank you~ *bows*

[theoogtree]

...I just realized, this is like 10 times etter than I thought it was at first
Because like. I tend to skip over smut if its not my preferred pairing. But I never thought about skipping any of this XDD
KangTeuk 8D
Ehh cornyness is good sometimes. XD

[cherryshot]

O_o . . .well... it's not that good? :'D
Good to know that it worked ^_^

it is,sometimes good :)

[cherryshot]

;D You have no idea how close it was that he almost made Chul stop..

I just think the ending is kinda...flat, but maybe i'll re-write it someday :D

x'D A little caps is allowed...
oh, but be careful on the caps-cops.

Thank you for reading and commenting :)

[cherryshot]

I couldn't stop them :D
I bet Chullie is pretty sweet under the shy-tough-act he has

I'll hide you from them :D

[catherine_leite]

this is good bb! teukchul....yumm..... XDDD

[cherryshot]

Thank you^^
These two just..they don't leave me alone! I seriously wasn't able to focus on anything else until I got this done last night..
(and now my head is filled with new ideas, so I think the success was short lived) x'D

[catherine_leite]

Ah... they just won't get out form your head,right?? *nods nods*
I had many ideas for NC fics... I just don't have confident o write it down... so... they never finished... -__-

[cherryshot]

yeah.. it's like they've made a permanent inhabitance into my brain..
whenever I get stuck on some fic, or have a blank moment, there will be TeukChul flashes going before my eyes :D

Write,write<3
I am not that confident about NC-fics either, but somehow they end up going there anyways ;D

[ayoshiari83]

Gosh!
only heechul's kiss could heal the emoteuk.
i love TeukChul even more. especially for the rated R one fic.
gah im going crazy for this 83 lines.

[cherryshot]

Omo... your icon... the performance just won't leave me alone x'D
emofrog needs a princess :)

and Bonamana has to be loved for the 83-line moments~ :'D
Thank you for reading :]

[ayoshiari83]

haha, i'm 83lines hardcore shipper. cause of them, 83-ers people become so young.
the main point of bonamana it has to be teuk opening his blazer, and heechul back-hugging him. like my icon. perfect.
it could be good if they add kiss performance too. GAAAAAHHH!!
/really need to re-read your fic again/

[cherryshot]

Yeah...they make age disappear ;D

Teukie-shoulder's <3
and I bet Heechul will do something in the future, it's in-avoidable,
I mean...he kissed Henry, how could he resist doing it to Teukie? :)
( And I so didn't get any ideas when he said that he and Leeteuk stayed up late after GDA, especially after seeing the fancam of Heechul hugging and escorting Teuk backstage.)

*blush* glad to know it is readable :D

[beayuu]

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OMGGGGG
THANK YOU I'M IN LIMBO LAND NOW

[cherryshot]

:'D Don't choke.

You're welcome..kekeke... Be careful not to break you back ;)

Thank you for reading and commenting ;]