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Excelling in the Game of Pretend

May 03, 2009 16:44

Author: Chhhachie
Title: Excelling in the Game of Pretend
Pairing: Mark/Sabrina
Rating: PG
Summary: A little look into the heads of Mark and Sabrina, with a concluding ending that everyone should enjoy!
Comments: This was written as a stream of consciousness, and I think it worked. It can be taken to be anytime between the start of the season, to ( Read more... )

Comments 2

fountnofthought March 3 2008, 22:38:55 UTC

Ooooooooh. I like. Lots. That was wonderfully something else. ;-) Loved the changing of perspectives, all the snuggly not quite moments, the connection exhibited in actions instead of words...

It was a complete change of pace, and it was delightful. Also, I loved the ending bits of each of the sections. And the fistfuls of sheets instead of fistfuls of his t-shirt. It that's not longing, I don't know what is. Wonderful job. Yay for stream of consciousness!

sweetcaroline20 March 6 2008, 00:29:22 UTC

"He could only let out a breath of relief as their lips met again, as his same feelings were spoken out loud. The torture was over. The minds of endless worries and thoughts were clear, as they finally surrendered to the game of pretend.

There were no secrets. Just them."

(sigh) This was so sweet and very well written!