What Is Love? Chapter 3

[chhhachie]

Author: Chhhachie
Title: What Is Love?
Part: 3/5
Rating: PG
Summary: Mark gets a tiny bit closer to the conclusion he’s so desperately searching for...with the help of someone unexpected :)
Comments: I added in a new character...but she remains nameless, and I think that’s the smartest thing to do...so while you’re reading, remember that I wrote it

Comments

[gydas]

Lol! Love it! Poor Marky being hounded and annoyed by his new partner, hopefully this isn't a premonition! Love Sabrina's line about bringing India's fashion to LA, that would be totally awesome if she did! Can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the amazing work! ♥ Tiffany

[fountnofthought]

Wow, that's one sassy partner our poor Marky has! ;-) Way to use her for some important realizations. I loved the thought process in this one, particularly:
Nobody ever immediately loves their significant other. That’s kind of the point of the use of the word ‘falling’ when people talk about it. It doesn’t happen overnight. Love is just a word that we use to define the result.
I thought that was very insightful, and it's important for him to realize in that moment.

Oh yeah, and this: Perhaps it was just that she wasn’t Sabrina.

Knife to the heart! That just makes me sad (but in a good way, because it was well written!)

I'm loving this. Go you. ;-)