What Is Love? Chapter 4

[chhhachie]

Author: Chhhachie
Title: What Is Love?
Part: 4/5
Pairing: Mark/Sabrina
Rating: PG
Summary: Sabrina comes a little bit closer to finally figuring out her feelings, when she is confronted in a situation much more public than she would have liked ;)
Comments: I had fun writing this chapter...but it was impossible for me to spit out! It took way longer than

Comments

[fountnofthought]

Yaaaaaaaaaay! New chapter! I don't care how long it took - it was worth it. ;-)

How completely hysterical and intrusive and perfect. Your dialogue (plus text messages), as always, was so right on the money. That the girls were answering for her cracked me up. And then her sweet little half of a declaration. Completely smitten and precious.

Also, I loved the end - that little bit of description that pulled it all together (and made me awfully antsy for what happens next...).

I'm going to hate to see this one end. It's full of fabulous.

[gydas]

Absolutely love the new chapter! Just so funny and cute! Loved the text messages back and forth they sound just like Mark and Sabrina! My favorite lines: “The entire nation of India is going to know about our relationship by tonight. Oh, and about forty other Asian and European countries as well. Just a heads up ;) -Sabrina”Yes, she was feeling much more than what she could put into words. He had no idea how much she missed him. How much she wanted to see him. How much she wanted to tell him how she really, truly, deeply felt, even though she wasn't even quite sure what she felt. I can't wait to see what happens next but I'll be sad to see it finished! Keep up the amazing work! ♥ Tiffany

[fuegohielo]

One word WONDERFUL!

[han_corrupted]

GORGEOUS. just gorgeous. i loved every single thing about it. really wonderful. the texts, the answering-questions-for-sabrina - everything, it was just perfect. really awesome. great job. can't wait for the next chapter!

[ropat]

YYAAAHHH!!! Another awesome update!! Can't wait to read the next chapter!! You gonna do like a sequel to this one when your done? You soo should.