What Is Love? Chapter 5

[chhhachie]

Author: Chhhachie
Title: What Is Love?
Part: 5/5
Pairing: Mark/Sabrina
Rating: PG
Summary: The conclusion of the horribly dragged on story! What will our favorite couple finally get to say to each other when they meet face to face for the first time in two months?
Comments: I think I always knew in the back of my mind how this was going to end up...but

Comments

[kikinini7]

PERFECT ENDING TO THE STORY. I was waiting for this chapter and was so excited to see it there and read it but part of me didn't want to because I didn't want it to end. I love the two points of view. I was almost shaking as I read it, it made me so excited!

Love the way you used "Almost, but not quit" twice. And the ending!! I was laughing so hard and getting some "Are you insane?" looks from my sister.
Great job. Can't wait for your next stories!
♥Elise

[chhhachie]

i get looks like that from MY sister when i start laughing at all the other hilarious stories i read on this site!!!!!! i'm glad you got a kick out of it...i definitely enjoyed writing that ending :)

[han_corrupted]

Aw, this was so cuuuute. I've followed this and I've just been in love with it forever. It's so cute and funny and definitely something I can see them thinking about, being in agony about. It's so well written and I just adore your writing.

And this last chapter was just the icing on the cake. Absolutely brilliant. I didn't think it was jumpy at all, it was really lovely the way you switched POV's so frequently. And all the actions and thoughts were just spot-on and gorgeous. The whole running-into-each-other's-arms was so perfect. DEFINITELY my favourite moment, that whole sequence. And the ending was just awesome. Totally a brilliant ending to an amazing story and just wow. :D I have to give you mad props for making them say they were falling for each other and not saying they were in love straight away (even if they are). That was just... Gorgeous, amazing and any other positive adjective known to man. ^^ Fabulous job with that, really.

Thanks for writing this, I had so much fun reading it! <3

[chhhachie]

oh i'm so glad you liked it!! i really wanted to make their reuniting moment not too sappy, but filled with enough sappy sentences to make people enjoy it! it was fun to write, because all the angst i had been writing in the past few chapters was finally over, and i could just focus on being all cutesy :)