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Free Time chapter 3

Apr 01, 2009 20:58

Author: Chhhachie
Title: Free Time
Part: 3/??
Pairing: Mark/Sabrina
Summary: Mark and Sabrina have a very meaningful moment, that is followed by some sarcastic bantering back and forth...which only makes the meaningful moment that much sweeter.
Comments: Not very related to the last chapter...but it involves a lot of sarcastic dialogue. I've seemed ( Read more... )

Comments 5

gydas February 2 2008, 02:50:10 UTC

Awwwww! That was adorable! I loved their little fighting/flirty moments! I love all the nose kisses a little variation of the forehead kiss! Keep up the amazing work! Can't wait to see what happens next! *hugs* ♥ Tiffany

fuegohielo February 2 2008, 04:47:34 UTC

I am such a hopeless romantic and you are feeding my addiction. This was perfection in story form, love it!

kikinini7 February 2 2008, 15:12:57 UTC

I love these random moments. They are just soo cute! Keep up the AMAZING work! ♥Elise

devexation February 2 2008, 22:45:24 UTC

That was such a cute chapter! I can totally imagine this banter actually happening with those two. Keep up the great work =D

fountnofthought February 4 2008, 16:11:23 UTC

I love this series. It is so wonderful on so many levels. You of course hit all the sarcastic dialogue, but I didn't have a single doubt about that. My favorite line of dialogue is Mark calling Sabrina a stalker. Hee.

But you also hit some beautiful notes of reflective description that I really enjoyed. I think you integrated the two tones very well.

My favorite line in the whole thing?

his hands reaching out to find hers reaching toward him

Mmmmm. Yup, that's it. So much in that one little phrase. I love.