Free Time chapter 4

[chhhachie]

Author: Chhhachie
Title: Free Time
Pairing: Mark/Sabrina
Part: 4/???
Summary: Bad news on a rainy day. But as always, the sun always comes out in Mark and Sabrina Land! (Along with some necessary awkwardness of course) : )
Comments: This was fun to write. I'm trying to focus on tiny tidbits of their relationship that come straight out of my imagination

Comments

[itsasnapshot]

Aww, cute!! I loved it!!! It was nice to come home to something this light-hearted and fun after today! Thanks!! You are an amazing writer (and I think I like this story - all the parts - the best of everything you've written...they're all so cute...but I love all your stuff)!!

[fuegohielo]

I love it. You did capture awkward perfectly. I always love your story lines.

[fountnofthought]

Oh. Oh my. This is me, a puddle of goo. Probably on Mark's kitchen floor. ;-)

That was gorgeous. I love this series so much, because of the specificity that lends itself so beautifully to real depth of feeling. You're accomplishing so much in each one - it's quite astounding.

In this one, you gave us playful banter, meaningful interactions with parents, and then an ending to just knock us right over. Those last three lines were heaven. Perfect dialogue, and a perfect amount of description to place it. I loved this.

[hollytiger]

awwwwwwwwww now that ending had me melting into a pile of goo.

[kikinini7]

The ending....OMG. I loved it!! I can't say much more than that.
♥Elise