Free Time Chapter 6

[chhhachie]

  Author: Chhhachie
Title: Free Time
Part: 6/??
Pairing: Mark/Sabrina
Summary: The rain is back...and it brings a sense of worry, but as always, ends happily for our favorite couple.
Comments: This doesn't involve as much interaction between them...but I think it works that way. As usual, I never intended it to have any real meaning, besides pure

Comments

[han_corrupted]

*squeals* Eek.

That is just fantastic. Just heartbreakingly wonderful. I love this. GORGEOUS writing.
Everything was just absolutely brilliantly paced. The dialogue, the description, everything.
Mark's worry is so palpable and Sabrina's fear... And Shirley's all-knowing. All fantastic.
I'm absolute mush. I LOVED this.
Have to read it like seven times over and then add to my memories. I really love it.
Great, great writing. Thanks for writing this, it suits perfectly for today. ^^
<3

[fountnofthought]

My computer was being a stupidhead yesterday, so I didn't read this when you put it up. But it was a perfect thing to wake up to this morning! (Well, that and about a gallon of coffee. Which I drank before starting to review. Trust me, it'll be better this way.)

As usual, I'm loving the intimacy and fun you capture in these little pieces. It's the little things that can mean so much. In this one, there were about a million of them, so I think I shall make a list:

He knew she was probably contemplating why he would possibly know Sabrina’s car had bad brakes. He was actually wondering that himself.
This was great, and so true - the way that little bits of knowledge about one's beloved just gather up slowly, without any real consciousness.

“Right in the middle of my soap. I love these American television shows...”
Love Shirley, and I can so see her having little quirks like these.

With a squeak, she forced her eyes open, remembering she was driving. Eyesight was pretty important.
Right here, you hit a great moment of