FIC: Atlantis Eve

Jan 06, 2010 09:17

Title: Atlantis Eve
Author: chiarahhue
Rating: PG-13 for a bit of bad language
Pairings: John/Elizabeth, Lorne/OC, various friendships
Disclaimer: I do not own Stargate: Atlantis or any of the characters. If I did, I would’ve taken better care of all of them.
Summary: Just because John could’ve been Mensa doesn’t mean he can’t be clueless.
Author’s Note: My ( Read more... )

sparky santa, teyla, fic, carson, s/w, caldwell, lorne, sheppard/weir

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wanderingsmith January 8 2010, 01:48:33 UTC
awww!!! :D {{hug}} that was lovely!

“I dare say these days, even 3rd graders don’t say ‘boink’,” Carson muttered under his breath

“You’re boinking Elizabeth for bacon??”
rotlfmao!!!

whose father is captain of a fully armed interstellar battle cruiser
general caldwell uh? cool :)

love the natural connection between them at the start, you wrote it flowing so naturally..

good plotting :D each additional poke to reinforce the angst, well done.

:D@ lorne, brave man indeed... wait till you have to meet momma in law!

aww, love Elizabeth finally setting him straight! and a quiet dance together :D

LOL@ rodney having a fit.

and yes, very astute observation carson.

well that worked out really well! {hugs you}

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chiarahhue January 8 2010, 06:37:27 UTC
Thanks! {hugs back} I'm glad you liked it :-)

Every since we talked about a possible Teyla and Caldwell romance, it's been stuck in my head, lol. And yeah, poor Lorne - it will be a long time (if ever!) before he gets over the urge to salute his prospective in-laws all the time!

I'm glad you thought the angst came across - you know how much I struggled with that!

yes, poor Rodney. I just can't help myself - between him and Kavanagh, I always need to give them a hard time.

And thanks for reviewing - your comments always mean alot to me ♥

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