here is the first sin. Me wanna thank everyone who reviewed and especially Rina-chan who helped me a lot to go through this and fight my laziness! thanks for your beta! ^__
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*jumps everywhere and hugs* many thanks!! well, i must admit, i love to see a possessive Fuji as much as a possessive Ryoma, for me, they belong to each other! ^^
lol, "people's ass to beat"... i thought Ryoma would think like that...
about the Fuji-sempai thing.. i'm somehow glad you mention this! cause i didn't know what to write... i know they're the same age,with Syusuke being a few months older than Eiji...so i didn't know if Eiji should call him Fuji-kun or not...that's why i decided to used this form, but i can always say it's a way of showing Eiji's strange logic and love of using nicks! ^__^
anyways, thanks a lot for reviewing, and about the few spelling errors, i saw them too late, and couldn't correct them...or can I stil?? oO;; still am confused with LJ
Sloth might take some time but will be written one day!
Very well descriced of Greed. Just a few 'necessity' errors but all in all very nice fic ^__~ Can't wait for the next sin installment. You still can fix errors on LJ just edit the entry. I also can help you on name calling or whatsoever ^^ Ganbatte ne. sorry for commenting so late
thanks a lot! ^____^ glad it stayed focused on 'greed' I feared it wouldn't be 'enough' and i didn't want to put here events i wanted to keep for later.
hm...by 'necessity' errors, what do you mean? *aurelie quite intrigued and willing to learn more in order to correct errors*
name calling... yup, help wuld be gladly accepted! by watching more episodes last night, i noticed that Eiji actually calls Fuji 'fujiko'. i didn't notice earlier. :3 well, would you mind if i bug you when the next chapter is finished in order to check it?
and no pb about late comment! ^__~ I myself often forget to review while reading, so am catching up tonight! ^o^
Well, according to the last episodes Ryoma won against Tezuka, Tezuka won against Fuji which means automatically Ryoma is stronger than Fuji. But Fuji could give Ryoma an impression that he won't be able to beat him still for some certain reasons ~__^ that is the 'necessity' error. It's not something big ^^
"Nya, Ochibi, arigato!!! You made it! Now Evil Momo-kun has to treat us! Eiji-sempai is so proud of you!" Eiji always calls Momoshiro -> Momo or Momo-chin (twice) so this part is kind of weird. That's the name calling part. And yup only Eiji that calls Fuji like that. The rest are calling Fuji by his family name except for Yumiko 'Syusuke' and Yuuta 'Aniki' Mizuki 'Fuji-kun' and his kouhai 'Fuji-sempai' Sure do I'll be more than happy to help you. Just AIM or email or whatever for checking ^^ <3
honto ne?? Ryoma beat Tezuka??? @_@ i so wanna watch them now!!! but am only at the 115 one...the others are slowly being downloaded...ok, now i understand the errors thing! ^__^ maybe i should out AU in the disclaimers... thing i always forget to put in the fics... -_-;;
hm, thanks a lot for this, i'll go back to the entry ...one day... when i feel less lazy... *yawns* PoT episodes time!!!lol sush a cool way to go to bed! ^__~
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I already told you what I think about the new chapter and I'm really looking forward to the next one *huggles*
btw.. I think it's Happy Easter? xD
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well, for the next chapter, i think you'll have to wait a bit, but you might see it...one day!lol
yes that's it! happy easter!
jeez, without my dictionary, i'm totally lost! -_-;;
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lol, "people's ass to beat"... i thought Ryoma would think like that...
about the Fuji-sempai thing.. i'm somehow glad you mention this! cause i didn't know what to write... i know they're the same age,with Syusuke being a few months older than Eiji...so i didn't know if Eiji should call him Fuji-kun or not...that's why i decided to used this form, but i can always say it's a way of showing Eiji's strange logic and love of using nicks! ^__^
anyways, thanks a lot for reviewing, and about the few spelling errors, i saw them too late, and couldn't correct them...or can I stil?? oO;; still am confused with LJ
Sloth might take some time but will be written one day!
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MaY
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hm...by 'necessity' errors, what do you mean? *aurelie quite intrigued and willing to learn more in order to correct errors*
name calling... yup, help wuld be gladly accepted! by watching more episodes last night, i noticed that Eiji actually calls Fuji 'fujiko'. i didn't notice earlier. :3 well, would you mind if i bug you when the next chapter is finished in order to check it?
and no pb about late comment! ^__~ I myself often forget to review while reading, so am catching up tonight! ^o^
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"Nya, Ochibi, arigato!!! You made it! Now Evil Momo-kun has to treat us! Eiji-sempai is so proud of you!" Eiji always calls Momoshiro -> Momo or Momo-chin (twice) so this part is kind of weird. That's the name calling part. And yup only Eiji that calls Fuji like that. The rest are calling Fuji by his family name except for Yumiko 'Syusuke' and Yuuta 'Aniki' Mizuki 'Fuji-kun' and his kouhai 'Fuji-sempai' Sure do I'll be more than happy to help you. Just AIM or email or whatever for checking ^^ <3
MaY
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hm, thanks a lot for this, i'll go back to the entry ...one day... when i feel less lazy... *yawns* PoT episodes time!!!lol sush a cool way to go to bed! ^__~
aurelie =^-^=
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