A poem about my Love.

Apr 07, 2004 17:11

Once Upon A Dream

Once upon a dream, I knew you.
Once upon a dream, I loved you.
Once upon a dream, it's over now.

Outside of the dream, I know you.
Outside of the dream, I love you.
Outside of the dream, it's just the beginning.

Copyright ©2004 Roxxanna Renee Seifert

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Another Beautiful Write hendrixr April 7 2004, 21:11:14 UTC
Lovely poem again Roxxanna. Truly does capture the feeling of living within a dream. Love can be that way, then you wake only to see the cruel reality of a nightmare like dream from which you wish you could wake only to find you cannot. This was lovely...truly came right from your heart. Look forward to seeing more.

*Nae/Renee*

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Always so nice. chibi_frootloop April 8 2004, 11:00:42 UTC
You are always so nice.
You are always so sweet
I hope you never leave.
I hope you never forget me
You are a very good friend.
You are a very good person.
I hope you never change.
I hope you never become different.

^_^ A poem off the top of my head to you Nae!

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Re: Always so nice. hendrixr April 8 2004, 15:45:59 UTC
Roxxanne I am truly touched by your poem. Your words were very sweet. Poetry comes from the heart, whether the poem be great or small. Your words are very kind. They touch me deeply. Hope to see more of your work within my visits to this site.

*Nae*

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