Freedom (2/?)

[chibi_panda]

Title: Freedom (2/?)
Author: Sam
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Ohkura Tadayoshi has three weeks of freedom left before he gets hitched. Can he find it in the short, cute, mesmerizing host that he's picked out to be his last taste of bachelorhood?
Fandom: JE, Kanjani8, Ohkura Tadayoshi/Yasuda Shota, Mentions of many other couples including Nishikido Ryo/Uchi

Comments

[carey_chan]

Peachie??? Holy massu! *lol*
the dog...gosh..painted dog nails...yaiy...that`s just tooo~~queer XD
(And I always assumed my best friend to become too queer XD..well..but painting schäferhund`s nails would be quite different ne? XD)

would ♥ to read the next chap as soon as you upload *___*

[bumped]

The faggotry of it all killed me. LOL PEACHIE. LOL PAINTED NAILS AND PINK STUDDED COLLAR O GOD. And Ohkura being so ~*~flamingly~*~ sexy AND gay is just. Idek. And the beginning made me laugh (lol aren't you the heir to pork or sth?!)

it moves differently in comparison to the last chapter, more lighthearted, but still manages to show off some of your characterization. ugh. this is rly good.

some grammar mistakes? i hope i don't sound pretentious i don't mean it. D:
He was almost glad when he Peachie decided

there may have been another one but i can't refind it. 8D;

[yuki84]

Oh yess... Ohyass.More.Please.

[crux_australis]

You have no idea how much Pretty Woman is my ABSOLUTE favorite movie of all time. D: In fact, I was just tellling an RL friend about it last night. :O

Haha...Ohkura sounds like the perfect man, but in the end, poor Shouta's gonna have to learn how to mend a broken heart quickly, if he can't get Ohkura to change his mind about getting married. TT^TT Oh, the apprehension I'm feeling right now for him. *weeps* D:

[sumomo_yuki]

PEACHIE IS SO CUTE!!! I can just imagine the Boston Terrier like that! hehehe awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee <3333