Yeah. It was horribly rushed and it starts off a little awkward (well, I think so) but then (hopefully) it should flow more. I had to repeat the word happy at the beginning to make myself write something happy because my brain kept giving me angst and I was like NO I DO NOT WANT ANGST but I kept coming up with it.
He was happy tonight. Genuinely
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seriously, you need to continue this. i want moar yewook from you. even though yesung was so seductive in here, it can't stop! it needs to continue.
this is cute. this is good. i can't believe you don't think so.
like, really why do you have to down yourself? this is good! now put it into a longfic. (ok, now i'm the one who's impatient. move aside, ryeowook.)
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I have like, 3 yewooks or so in the works, but yeah, see above. I would like to finish at least one soonish. But I've said that for a while now...
I don't hate it, I just don't think it was the best thing I've ever written.
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i have alot of yewooks in the work too. i need to stop getting carried away and start finishing them. 8D
i want to see something finished by you too! but i'm not rushing you. well, i'm trying not to. C:
stfu, it only matters that i like it. /evil
but yes, i think everybody is unhappy with their writing, no matter what.
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Dammit, I wish they HAD kissed. D:
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You know they kissed as soon as they got back to the dorm. And then had sex. And kissed some more.
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