My mind is a strange, strange place.

Sep 29, 2010 08:25

Title: You Can Look But You Can't Touch
Day: September 29
Prompt: Alpha Male
Verse: Pfft, I have absolutely no idea other than that it's an AU. Maybe WFC?
Rating: PG-13ish?
Words: 2311
Other Characters: Starscream, various unnamed mechs at the end.
Warnings: Fail!pickup lines, slight cussing, slight violence, slight usage of pimp terminology, ( Read more... )

transformers, story:pleasure caste, fanfic

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mmouse15 September 29 2010, 19:43:24 UTC
Oh, my! I kept laughing as Starscream got himself into more and more trouble throughout the story, until the very end when it became apparent just how much trouble he was really in, and then I felt very sorry for Starscream. Nifty take on the prompt!

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chibi_veneficus September 30 2010, 12:56:32 UTC
Yeah, I was kinda mean with him in this. He should bouncy back from it fairly soon, though xD;;

So glad you enjoyed!

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insane_no_baka September 29 2010, 20:39:33 UTC
Oh poor Starscream. He's in for a world of pain. But of course....Prowl does belong to Jazz. *nodnod* Definitely belongs to Jazz. XD

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chibi_veneficus September 30 2010, 13:04:18 UTC
And Jazz always takes care of what's his. No one else is allowed to touch but him :o

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thepheonixqueen September 30 2010, 00:31:19 UTC
Great response! i'd love to see more of this 'verse, it is very interesting. Love to see how jazz and prowl got together in this verse.

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chibi_veneficus September 30 2010, 13:06:11 UTC
Well, there has been a few ideas lurking in my mind but my classes and job have been eating up a good portion of time. Maybe something will pop up once things cool down a bit. Maybe.

Glad you enjoyed! :D

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1readervb October 1 2010, 02:13:47 UTC
I have never written PJ fanfic, but I would come out of lurk-dom to see more of this 'verse.

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chibi_veneficus October 2 2010, 00:11:43 UTC
Oh my, a fellow lurker? Hello there! :D

There's been a few bunnies nibbling here and there and if any of them stay still enough to be written, I'll be sure to post them. ^_~

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gatekat September 30 2010, 03:20:38 UTC
Very cool story and culture. Is this setting one you've used before?

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chibi_veneficus September 30 2010, 13:08:52 UTC
Nope, I haven't used this setting before but there maybe more in the future. Maybe. <.<

Glad you enjoyed!

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sideslip_tf October 1 2010, 02:11:04 UTC
I read this story this morning and I couldn't get it out of my mind! Wonderful job. Very interesting interpretation.

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chibi_veneficus October 1 2010, 23:48:28 UTC
Hope it didn't distract you from anything. :P Glad you enjoyed!

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