Comments | chibi_veneficus: At least this one didn't take a full year?

chibi_veneficus

At least this one didn't take a full year?

Feb 08, 2011 18:37

Title: Verumi (2/3)
Verse: AU/G1
Rating: PG
Characters: Jazz, Mirage, Ratchet, mentions of others; Jazz/Prowl friendship
Warnings: Angst. Lots of angst. Ratchet's abuse of italics. I also twist some concepts around a bit to suit the plot better >.>
Summary: Jazz had always felt that Prowl was a little...different then the rest of them.
Notes: So I ( Read more... )

transformers, story:verumi, fanfic

Comments 10

easterofflesh February 9 2011, 02:02:57 UTC

I'm on the edge of my seat! I can't wait to see how this ends. Thank you for writing such a compelling story! 8D

chibi_veneficus February 9 2011, 13:02:58 UTC

I'm glad you're enjoying the crazy ride! :D

renegadewriter8 February 9 2011, 04:02:03 UTC

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE! XD I love this verse can't wait to see if Jazz tells Optimus and what he says to Prowl. Update soooon! Pleaseee!

chibi_veneficus February 9 2011, 13:05:05 UTC

I'm glad you're liking it so far! Hopefully the next chapter won't take too long to write :)

prowlsgirl February 9 2011, 11:14:13 UTC

O_O I hope Prowl's okay.

chibi_veneficus February 9 2011, 13:06:07 UTC

He will be. Not now but, uh, later, kinda? 8D;;

anonymous February 9 2011, 11:16:49 UTC

Jazz talking to Mirage and Ratchet is giving us an interesting view on sparks and memory cores. Thank you for continuing, and I look forward to more.

chibi_veneficus February 9 2011, 13:08:22 UTC

Trust me when I say that this thing will get done sooner or later. :)

Glad you're enjoying the ride so far!

anavidbookworm February 9 2011, 15:42:55 UTC

I just love the concept behind this story and all of the philosophical questions it brings up. I have a feeling by Jazz's reaction that the Decepticons have Prowl or they at least know where he is.

You did a great job with the reactions of both Mirage and Ratchet but I would be interested to see Optimus's reaction. Since he holds the Matrix, I bet he would have some insightful thoughts.

chibi_veneficus February 10 2011, 13:21:38 UTC

I'm glad you're enjoying the ride so far! As for the D-cons, I can neither confirm nor deny that statement but I can say that Stuff will Go Down in the next part.

Really? That's a relief to hear. :D That was one of the things I was worrying about when I was writing. I always have a bit of trouble when I'm trying to gauge how character A will realistically react to character B and vice versa. As for Optimus...I'll poke at the muses and see what they say. :3