So the bunnies decided to join together and create SUPER BUNNY

[chibi_veneficus]

Title: Pleasure Caste: Just As I Thought It Was Going Alright (02/??)
Verse: WFC AU
Rating: PG
Characters: Jazz, Prowl, Trailbreaker, Streetstar.
Warnings: Talk of vague future!plot, enforcers not really doing their job.
Summary: When Jazz was being picked up from the station, he was not expecting to find out that some of the enforcer caste was

Comments

[gwenithcoy]

[chibi_veneficus]

I'm glad you're liking it so far! :D

[sideslip_tf]

I am so glad to read more of this story! The premise is great for it. Very interesting to see a story developed that delves into the caste system of Cybertron. I like how even though Jazz has a high position he decides to not abuse it. Keep up the good work.

[chibi_veneficus]

Who knew that a crack!fic could spawn a semi-serious story series - I certainly didn't. xD Yes, Jazz knows that abusing the power he has can do no good, which is why he's going to be so hellbent on finding out what's going on. :3

Glad you're enjoying the ride!

[cmdrtekk]

Nice even transition from the previous chapter to this one. Jazz's personality/character shines in his inner thoughts to himself. You write this soft humor beautifully. As in previous chapters the pace/flow of the words was well done allowing this scene/scenes to move nicely without feeling to rushed. You did great.

Pleased to see more in this 'verse. Your creative/imagination shines i this world you have created and seeing a more in depth look is wonderful.

I think when something catches Jazz's attention, those involved will be swept away - for good or bad, so it is probably best to catch Jazz's attention in a good way. Poor Prowl won't have a chance (so to speak).

Thank you for sharing. Looking forward to more as you are able.

[chibi_veneficus]

Thank you so very much for the kind words! I'm glad that my perceptions of Jazz for this 'verse are coming through clearly and that you're enjoying the world I'm slowly building up around the characters.

Yes, Prowl is certainly going to be swept away by the whirlwind called Jazz, and he won't even realize it at first. By the time he does, it will be far too late for him to try and extract himself from Jazz's clutches...not that he'll want to, mind you. ;D

[anavidbookworm]

I'm so glad you wrote more for this verse. :) You've done such a great job with Jazz's character. He's upstanding but still a player; he likes to get away with things but is going to look into the enforcer department because they are allowing people to get away with things. He's such a contradiction that you just don't know what he will do next. Prowl is going to have no clue what to do with him.

[chibi_veneficus]

Jazz knows that he's a riddle wrapped in a mystery inside an enigma and he wants to keep it that way 'cause he likes it that way. Prowl, of course, will not at first. ;D

I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far!

[bluetaelon]

Glad to find you did end up writing another chapter of this:)