I can't believe I finished it with time to spare @A@;;

[chibi_veneficus]

Title: Apoapsis
Prompt: #21 La Douleur Exquise (French) - The heart-wrenching pain of wanting someone you can’t have. (Centers on the one whose love is not returned)
Verse: G1 (although it's vague enough that it can fit anywhere, really)
Rating: PG
Words: 687
Contains: Very brief self-stimulation and lots of angst.
Summary: Jazz held the

Comments

[bluebirdsoaring]

Poor, poor Prowl!! I love how you filled the prompt =) Only Prowl would have the bolts to confront Jazz and tell him the truth...at least Jazz was willing to help him with their mutual "problem" but that is an terrible place to be =( As someone who has loved and never had it returned for the same reason and could only watch (but never had the guts to speak up!) I like Prowl's solution better.

Your description of how Jazz burns Prowl's eyes is amazing =) And trying to bury his feelings in tatical data...keep trying Prowl...maybe it will work someday. Or, perhaps Jazz will see the light?

[chibi_veneficus]

I'm so glad you liked it! x3 But yeah, unrequited love can be a very painful thing to experience and I'm sorry you had to go through something like that *hug* I'm glad that I managed to get that feeling across, though.

Unfortunately in this story 'verse, they'll never get together. But there's plenty of other story 'verses in which they do have a happy ending :)