I can't believe I finished it with time to spare @A@;;

[chibi_veneficus]

Title: Apoapsis
Prompt: #21 La Douleur Exquise (French) - The heart-wrenching pain of wanting someone you can’t have. (Centers on the one whose love is not returned)
Verse: G1 (although it's vague enough that it can fit anywhere, really)
Rating: PG
Words: 687
Contains: Very brief self-stimulation and lots of angst.
Summary: Jazz held the gravitational

Comments

[fianna9]

Well-written, even if I do find it a little depressing. Poor Prowl, but you can't always help what you feel. You did a very good job showing how hard this is, and you didn't a good job showing how Jazz isn't the "bad guy". He just doesn't feel the same.

[fianna9]

Okay, my computer is driving me crazy. I meant to write "you did a good job showing how Jazz isn't the "bad guy".

Instead, it jumped my text and added the "n't" to did. AAArrrrggghhhh.....

I want my desktop back.

[chibi_veneficus]

Hehe, that's ok! I understood what you were trying to say and I can totally relate to computer troubles. For being so awesome, computers can certainly be very annoying >:I

Thank you! I'm very happy that I managed to convey that Jazz wasn't the 'bad guy'. You can't really help who you fall in love with and neither person can shoulder the blame.

[renegadewriter8]

Poor Prowl! Ohoo the talk must have been painful. One-sided love can suck so much. *hugs Prowl* Lovely to see you again ^^

[chibi_veneficus]

Ain't that the truth? But at least now Prowl won't have to deal with Jazz's solely platonic interactions anymore :x

Thank you! It's good to be back and writing (no matter how slowly) again. I missed hanging out at the comm :)

[sideslip_tf]

I understand Prowl's perspective about this (but it still hurts). Well-written. Have to respect Jazz though for agreeing to keep his distance.

[chibi_veneficus]

Thank you! :D

Jazz is mature enough to realize that pushing the issue won't help, especially when it's coming from the mech he's trying to help. He wishes it wasn't like that but there's nothing else he can do :

[mmouse15]

What a wonderful job of filling the prompt! Prowl's pain was very clear and wonderfully written.

[chibi_veneficus]

Thank you very much! x3