Stars Will Lead Us Home

Jun 25, 2010 16:30

Title: Stars Will Lead Us Home
Rating: PG
Pairing: Nathan/Peter
Warnings: slash, incest
Word Count: 298
Spoilers: up to 4x13
A/N: A ficlet I wrote for Read more... )

ficlet, heroes, petrellicest

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chibiariane June 26 2010, 12:28:59 UTC
Thank youuu, your comment is nearly longer than the whole ficlet, you make me happy! :D
And your head!canon for this fic is great, I think that's just what happened. ;D

And I think that's really the core of Nathan and Peter's relationship: as much as they've hurt each other over the years, they've never stopped loving each other, and it's a powerful thing.

Yeah, that's right and that's what you can see through season 3. Their relationship really is unique and I think I'll never be able to stop loving them. :D

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sakura_no_mi June 25 2010, 17:29:05 UTC
Squeeeee! ILU so much for writing this for me!! I loved it, and you are so clearly awesome! I know how hard it must be to write in a non-native language, and you really did a great job on this. The imagery and emotion definitely came across very well... And how can it be happy-sad all at the same time?? Damn it, I need to get back on the Petrellicest bandwagon. Thanks for reminding me how much I love these two boys <3

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chibiariane June 26 2010, 12:33:17 UTC
Awwww, thank you so much, I'm so glad you like it!! <33
ILU, too! :D
That's why I wrote it...
And I'm really happy that the emotions came across because as you said it's hard to write in a non-native language and still keep all the things you want to say in the fic.
Usually I write very complex and now I had to shorten everything, it was interesting. lol

Damn it, I need to get back on the Petrellicest bandwagon.

Definitely!
We can love both Wincest and Petrellicest, can't we? :D

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dumb_belle June 28 2010, 14:55:58 UTC
Wow :) Well done! I can't even imagine writing something coherent in a foreign language, let alone something good, but this is very, very good. It's sort of melancholy, and gentle and sweet. There's very little new in the way of Petrellicest, so this is really welcome.

(and omg I really love Firelies by Owl City)

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chibiariane June 28 2010, 17:37:00 UTC
Thank you!! <3
I'm so happy the ficlet turned out to be good and that I was able to get the emotions across!
The song helped me doing that because when I listen to it I just get this feeling... the feeling I tried to put into this ficlet. :D I love 'Fireflies', toooo! <33

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kidarania_nika February 16 2011, 01:25:08 UTC
I think I love this piece a little too much. It's short and suggestive, with sooooo many variables... Who is the Nathan that Peter is traveling with? Which "Nathan" did Peter bury? Who did Peter kill, and why/ was it Sylar-as-Nathan that Peter killed?

Does Nathan know?

You've obviously had deep thoughts about the brothers in general. This little snippet shows that. The simplicity of your word choice actually enhances this.

Eight months late in reading but... <3

~Kei

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chibiariane February 20 2011, 16:53:41 UTC
Thank you so much for commenting, I'm very happy that you found this little fic and actually liked it! :)
I wanted the reader to think about those questions and everyone should have own anwsers but here's what I thought: Peter buried the Nathan Sylar killed at the end of season 3. Peter killed Sylar to avenge Nathan. Then he travelled back in time and saved his brother by taking him to the future, the future where he murdered Sylar, because he wasn't able to live without Nathan.
Again, thanks for reading and I'm glad you like it! :)

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kidarania_nika February 20 2011, 22:05:31 UTC
Oh, wow. That was a combination I hadn't though of. That's quite a feat!

You wouldn't happen to be hiding anything else in English, would you? *hopeful smile*

~Kei

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chibiariane February 20 2011, 22:12:17 UTC
Hehe, unfortunately not! There are just icons and fanvideos I made, no other fics in english!

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