[EPILOGUE] Never Kiss a Sergeant and Walk Away

May 12, 2010 22:17


Title: A Distance of Seven Inches - Epilogue/ Never Kiss a Sergeant and Walk Away (Because she'll hunt you down.)

Author: Me, myself and I.

Genre: Humour/Romance. Analysis because Lightning is a robot, lol.

Characters/Pairings: HopexLightning + their posse. More of Lightning’s POV this time.

Ratings/Warnings: PG, though mild swearing.

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hope, fanfiction, final fantasy xiii, lightning, distance

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chibimeringue May 19 2010, 22:50:39 UTC
Thank you! <3 \o/

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androidia June 30 2010, 21:21:31 UTC
THIS.
THIS WAS FABULOUS.I AM ALSO SUPER LATE BUT THAT IS NOT THE POINT.

I read the entire thing in one go and it was absolutely fabulous! I loved everyones characterization. It seems so natural and organic. Throughout all of 5'5", I could practically hear Fang's voice saying all of her lines. It gave me shivers... and Hope? He's about as awkward and scatter-brained on the topic as I would have pegged him to be!

Also, the ending was great. xD

You write good fic my dear. VERY good fic. :') ♥

-memories-

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chibimeringue July 1 2010, 22:08:04 UTC
Ha ha! That's okay! Late comments are still just as welcome! <3

Thank you so much! ;u; I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I'll do my best to keep writing FFXIII! >xD

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chibimeringue July 23 2010, 15:53:25 UTC
Thank you~! <3 >u<

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veraliana September 11 2010, 07:49:41 UTC
You've made me squeal with fangirlish delight more than once in this fic. I absolutely ADORE it.

Your narrative is astounding. It's light and very engaging and perfectly makes you feel all the awkward and comical goodness. And the fluffiness! XD And I thought both Hope and Lightning were beautifully characterized. Exactly how I would have imagined them reacting ^^ Also, the rest of the cast <3 They totally would be unintentional cockblockers XD

Now I kind of want a picture of Fang wagging her finger and saying "Va-jay-jays only." Maybe it's the Fang/Vanille. idklol

I was up late reading this and now I am too giddy to sleep from all the win. Good thing I can sleep in tomorrow! *shot*

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