[FIC] The Out of Season Wedding March 2/2

May 15, 2010 13:00


Title: The out of season Wedding March / Congratulations to you, whom I loved. 2/2

Author: Me~!

Genre: Drama/Romance/Humour (More drama this time ‘round, I guess?)

Characters/Pairings: PrussiaxHungary/GilbertxElizaveta + Austria/Roderich. Mentions of others.

Rating/Warnings: PG-13 for foul language. Human names used.

Summary: Non-nation AU. ( Read more... )

aph, fanfiction, hungary, prussia

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Comments 19

xneyu May 16 2010, 06:24:37 UTC
Oh my god.

Oh my god.

This was absolutely perfect. I love this fanfiction - first, it makes me laugh my head off, then the next thing I know my eyes are welling up in tears. The dialogue between Hungary and Prussia just matches and fits in too well - and the way you personify Prussia. It's amazing. I would go more into detail, but your fanfic was just...asjdfklasdfhaskld WONDERFUL. <333 I think the ending it a bit abrupt, which is probably why you aren't too satisfied with it, but it still has a relieving touch to it.

Thank you for sharing this, this made my day. xD <3

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chibimeringue May 16 2010, 13:50:38 UTC
Thank you so much! Truthfully, I'm always a little afraid to write as Prussia (He's too awesome for me XD) But enjoy doing it anyways. <3 Thanks for the read, I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! ;u;

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antrea May 16 2010, 12:52:07 UTC
"HOLY SHIT YOU'VE GOT BOOBS."

and

"I think we've cleared all this up and decided she's mine now, right? No touchie."

and

Gil flinging Liz's ring out the window. HAHA.

All in all I loved it XD

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chibimeringue May 16 2010, 13:57:45 UTC
xD Hurrah! <3 Thank you for reading~!

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rosewolfie May 16 2010, 16:59:10 UTC
I-I gakfhskahf so wonderful!!! You portayed them so well! And the ring!! I have the perfect image in my head of that scene ^___^ The fact you built up the argument instead of just rushing into it.... Ahhh... You could just sort of hear their voiced getting louder and louder... To sum it up: this was so absolutely amazing!!!

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chibimeringue May 16 2010, 18:11:58 UTC
Bwahh, I'm glad you like it so much! XD

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jilligan9223 May 17 2010, 03:47:19 UTC
sdfuisfhnsnerjnsawrqaw!!! Perfect! My god I love this fanfiction cause it makes me laugh and cry. Please write Prussia and Hungary's wedding cause for some reason I think that would be lol tastic. Perfect in every single way possible. (would have liked to see Austria put up more of a fight but he's a pansy anyway so it works out.) Everyone was so in character! Good job, keep it up and keep writing this pairing please!

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chibimeringue May 17 2010, 14:46:12 UTC
Thank you so much!!
Bwahh, you don't know how much it's taking for me to hold my horses and not write Prussia and Hungary's wedding. xDD I've got so many fics going at once (my own fault) but I feel like such a one-trick pony, doing so many wedding-centric fics. . .

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languicious May 17 2010, 15:11:07 UTC
Awwwww! I was really sad at the end of part 1, cause I listened to the song while reading it :(
But...! This is my favorite paragraph for some reason:
"Gilbert’s next move was either brilliant, or the damn near stupidest thing he’d ever done. He grabbed her wrist, plucked that stupid little cockblocking ring from her finger, and threw it into the street with all his might faster than you can say ‘potato’. Her mouth gaped like a fish."

Awesome shiz. Thanks so much for writing this! :)

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chibimeringue May 18 2010, 02:17:17 UTC
If I'm allowed to pick favourites in my own fanfiction, I'd say Gil throwing the ring was most fun to write. xD Thanks for reading, I'm so glad you like it! > u

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