[FIC] So Close, Yet So Very, Very Far.

Aug 04, 2010 22:49


Title: So close, yet so very, very far / It could’ve been worse.
Author: Chibi
Genre: Humour. Not really romance, due to the canon-Junpei of P3P.
Characters/Pairings: Minako/Hamuko/FeMC and a very-much-a-virgin Junpei. Mentions of others.
Ratings/Warnings: PG-13 for foul language and innuendos. In-game quotes, minor P3P spoilers, fail!humour.
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persona 3, fanfiction, hamuko, junpei

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chibimeringue August 5 2010, 15:21:45 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so glad it inspired you to check out my other works! /overcome with glee

Oh man, was I ever hoping something would happen. But of course it wouldn't. ATLUS can be mean to us like that. DB

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kei_mai August 6 2010, 23:10:06 UTC
This was very hilarious, thank you for sharing! Poor Junpei. XD

His Link in P3P was really sweet, and made me like him a hundred times more. And yes, it's easier to write someone who is romantically dense than someone who has to play the idiot. I also love your other author notes. :3

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chibimeringue August 6 2010, 23:48:02 UTC
Oh my gosh, I couldn't stop fawning over him in my head. He was so lovely in his Social Link. ;u; I'm also glad someone else besides myself enjoys my ramblings. cx I'm glad you enjoyed the fic!

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bioniceye August 7 2010, 13:42:45 UTC
I love love love love this. Actually, it's my first time reading Persona fics (IDK why I don't read game ficsss ;__;) and I'm glad this is my first. AND SO! QUOTE TIME!

Embrace your desire...Oh dude, you don’t even know the half of it. I AM TEMPTED TO WIGGLE MY EYEBROWS sexual innuendo indeed.

She just raises a brow - a really deadly eyebrow. WIGGLING EYEBROW XD

“How are you guys?” Our fearless leader asks, any hint of embarrassment from before gone. Man, if she was a dude, she’d have brass balls, for sure. KILLED ME. If only you knew, Junpei. If only you knew about the male MC. I just love how Junpei describes the FeMC--fearless, perfect, awesome...it's like he adores her or something. Or maybe he's being sarcastic, hmm. Either way, I love this.

Ohh dude, dude. Does that mean they almost got to some lady-on-lady action?! Ho’snap! O///O I was thinking the same thing.

And your AN? I agree times infinity! I just started P3P with the female MC, and Junpei is just. so. adorkable. I want a manly man girl's bestfriend, too.

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chibimeringue August 7 2010, 21:47:07 UTC
I'm just gonna get it out there that your comment just made my day. <3

It's my more-or-less excuse that you can't date Junpei because he feels the FeMC is out of his league. (It's what I keep telling myself so I don't cry. ;A; ) She's the leader, a kickass fighter, smart and cuter than anything. I'd be intimidated too if I was a guy. xD

I'm so glad you enjoyed this! And feel free to waggle those 'brows all you like. I know I did. BD

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renjiluvah August 12 2010, 01:15:45 UTC
WOW that was AWESOME! This is the first Junpei fic I've ever read P3P version and I LOVED IT! You nabbed him perfectly! He's an idiot but a lovable one! And I agree, his S. Link is like torture! At first, you're like damn, we have to stay friends bc Atlus said so and then he just says the sweetest things-whu- it's like Atlus trying to give fangirls blue balls except we don't have any. DX

I DIED about the gay bar part and the way he tries to push his luck with the leader and he's like HOH CRAP she's armed! This is the most honest to Junpei fic I've ever read. Love! Thanks for the read! And kudos for being a writer that can actually write, not those Mary Sue writers who write like they're still learning the ABCs. :D

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chibimeringue August 18 2010, 19:00:12 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. xD Oh man, I so know how you feel. Atlus is so cruel, doing that to us fangirls. ; - ;

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farron_eclair August 18 2010, 05:47:45 UTC
LOL awesome~
How do you get Junpei again for this part?..leave akihiko out I presume

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chibimeringue August 18 2010, 19:00:48 UTC
xD Yeah. If you go with Mitsuru and Junpei instead of Akihiko, it kind of forces Junpei on the scene, lol.

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